<?xml version='1.0' encoding='UTF-8'?><?xml-stylesheet href="http://www.blogger.com/styles/atom.css" type="text/css"?><feed xmlns='http://www.w3.org/2005/Atom' xmlns:openSearch='http://a9.com/-/spec/opensearchrss/1.0/' xmlns:georss='http://www.georss.org/georss' xmlns:gd='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005' xmlns:thr='http://purl.org/syndication/thread/1.0'><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6926938288565421615</id><updated>2011-07-28T20:18:15.513-07:00</updated><category term='For the last'/><title type='text'>John Hay Community Academy Poetry</title><subtitle type='html'>Updated weekly, this site showcases poetry from the 2007-2008 Hands on Stanzas Residency, provided by the Poetry Center of Chicago.</subtitle><link rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#feed' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://johnhayschoolpoetry.blogspot.com/feeds/posts/default'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/6926938288565421615/posts/default?max-results=100'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://johnhayschoolpoetry.blogspot.com/'/><link rel='hub' href='http://pubsubhubbub.appspot.com/'/><author><name>Cassie Sparkman, Poet in Residence</name><uri>http://www.blogger.com/profile/00472910555378255990</uri><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='16' height='16' src='http://img2.blogblog.com/img/b16-rounded.gif'/></author><generator version='7.00' uri='http://www.blogger.com'>Blogger</generator><openSearch:totalResults>16</openSearch:totalResults><openSearch:startIndex>1</openSearch:startIndex><openSearch:itemsPerPage>100</openSearch:itemsPerPage><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6926938288565421615.post-4860967568952130161</id><published>2008-05-08T10:51:00.000-07:00</published><updated>2008-12-10T06:46:13.296-08:00</updated><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='For the last'/><title type='text'>Poetry Broadsides</title><content type='html'>&lt;div&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div&gt;For the last two weeks of the residency, students chose their favorite poems they wrote this year.  Then they revised their work and created a broadside that incorporated images from their own poems.  Finally, we took a "gallery walk" where students could see the amazing poems of their peers.  It was a great 20 weeks at John Hay Academy!&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div&gt;Check back next fall for new poems!!&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;a onblur="try {parent.deselectBloggerImageGracefully();} catch(e) {}" href="http://3.bp.blogspot.com/_C56kXvvnDnY/SCNAsEV956I/AAAAAAAAAEI/AuI_78ufZwU/s1600-h/S6301833.JPG"&gt;&lt;img style="float:left; 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We talked about how we know things--how sometimes we know a whole thing by its parts. Or sometimes what we know reveals what we don't know. The students wrote some great poems. Take a look!&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;span style="font-weight: bold;"&gt;Ms. Cole 6th grade&lt;/span&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;span style="font-weight: bold;"&gt;I Know&lt;/span&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;span style="font-weight: bold;"&gt;Keegan O.&lt;/span&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;I know Chicago by its huge buildings.&lt;br /&gt;I know spring by its flowers and sunny days.&lt;br /&gt;I know sleep by its dreams and nightmares.&lt;br /&gt;I know my mother by her voice when she calls me.&lt;br /&gt;I know the parents by their children.&lt;br /&gt;I know the land from the seas.&lt;br /&gt;I know love from hate.&lt;br /&gt;I know everything but the fear to move on.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;span style="font-weight: bold;"&gt;I Know&lt;/span&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;span style="font-weight: bold;"&gt;Pierre M.&lt;/span&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;I know my mother by her smile&lt;br /&gt;I know Rahkeem by his laugh&lt;br /&gt;I know Ms. Cole by her walk&lt;br /&gt;I know my brother by his walk&lt;br /&gt;I know death when I see it&lt;br /&gt;I know everything but my grandmother.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;I know my friends when I see them&lt;br /&gt;I know Antonio by his run&lt;br /&gt;I know my mom when she calls me&lt;br /&gt;I know my mom when she is&lt;br /&gt;in a good mood or bad&lt;br /&gt;I know everything but my grandmother.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;span style="font-weight: bold;"&gt;I Know&lt;/span&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;span style="font-weight: bold;"&gt;Daveon J.&lt;/span&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;I know limes in Malibu&lt;br /&gt;I know a dog by its ears&lt;br /&gt;I know my TV by its color&lt;br /&gt;I know y PS2 by the controller&lt;br /&gt;I know my school by the auditorium&lt;br /&gt;I know Super Jim’s by the people who work there&lt;br /&gt;I know Ms. Cole by her glasses&lt;br /&gt;I know everything but if I’m going to be&lt;br /&gt;a billionaire&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;span style="font-weight: bold;"&gt;Ms. Harris 6th grade&lt;/span&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;span style="font-weight: bold;"&gt;I Know&lt;/span&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;span style="font-weight: bold;"&gt;Malik. T&lt;/span&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;I know crying by its tears&lt;br /&gt;I know the orange by its color&lt;br /&gt;I know morning by its sun&lt;br /&gt;I know Medusa by the snakes in her hair&lt;br /&gt;I know Pandora by her box&lt;br /&gt;I know my grandma and the way to Vegas&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;span style="font-weight: bold;"&gt;I Know&lt;/span&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;span style="font-weight: bold;"&gt;Marquis S.&lt;/span&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;I know learning by the report card&lt;br /&gt;I know feelings by the way you act&lt;br /&gt;toward other people&lt;br /&gt;I know a dog from its smell&lt;br /&gt;I know when I’m near water&lt;br /&gt;because of the way it starts to get cold.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;span style="font-weight: bold;"&gt;I Know&lt;/span&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;span style="font-weight: bold;"&gt;Rayumos H.&lt;/span&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;I know my bike by&lt;br /&gt;its brand&lt;br /&gt;I know the rain by&lt;br /&gt;the thunder&lt;br /&gt;I know my mom by&lt;br /&gt;the snoring&lt;br /&gt;I know the music&lt;br /&gt;by the songs&lt;br /&gt;I know the clock&lt;br /&gt;by its ticking&lt;br /&gt;I know the sharpener&lt;br /&gt;by its shavings.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;span style="font-weight: bold;"&gt;I Know&lt;/span&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;span style="font-weight: bold;"&gt;George G.&lt;/span&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;I know my dad by his beard&lt;br /&gt;I know a monkey by its tail&lt;br /&gt;I know a zebra by its stripes&lt;br /&gt;I know fire by its glow&lt;br /&gt;I know Zeus by his thunderbolt&lt;br /&gt;I know an angel by its wings&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;span style="font-weight: bold;"&gt;Ms. Kessinger 6th grade&lt;/span&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;span style="font-weight: bold;"&gt;I Know&lt;/span&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;span style="font-weight: bold;"&gt;Johnny B.&lt;/span&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;I know Chicago by McDonald’s on every corner&lt;br /&gt;I know spring by the rain&lt;br /&gt;I know Rae by her socks&lt;br /&gt;I know my mom by her laugh&lt;br /&gt;I know my room by my floor&lt;br /&gt;I know my friends by their attitude&lt;br /&gt;I know how to read because of books.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;I know love by the touch&lt;br /&gt;I know trees from buildings&lt;br /&gt;I know John Hay from McNair&lt;br /&gt;I know Chicago Ave. from North Ave.&lt;br /&gt;I know everybody loves me&lt;br /&gt;because I’m me.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;span style="font-weight: bold;"&gt;I Know&lt;/span&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;span style="font-weight: bold;"&gt;Dawn H.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/span&gt;I know Keyonna by her walk&lt;br /&gt;I know the winter by its snow&lt;br /&gt;I know room 303 by its door&lt;br /&gt;I know my teacher by her hair&lt;br /&gt;I know when the sun comes out&lt;br /&gt;I know a park by its swings&lt;br /&gt;I know when a bus passes&lt;br /&gt;I know when my dad is coming&lt;br /&gt;I know everything but myself&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;I know when it is summer&lt;br /&gt;I know when something bad is coming&lt;br /&gt;I know when something good is about to happen&lt;br /&gt;I know everything but myself.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;span style="font-weight: bold;"&gt;I Know&lt;/span&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;span style="font-weight: bold;"&gt;Moesha T.&lt;/span&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;I know my mom when she is mad.&lt;br /&gt;I know her by her size.&lt;br /&gt;I know Ms. K. by her walk.&lt;br /&gt;I know Rae by her voice.&lt;br /&gt;I know Johnny by his laugh.&lt;br /&gt;I know everything but myself.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;I know Shaquita when she is happy.&lt;br /&gt;I know streets when it is noisy.&lt;br /&gt;I know Ms. Van by her smile.&lt;br /&gt;I know spring when it rains.&lt;br /&gt;I know everything but myself.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;I know my friend Marissa when she’s silly.&lt;br /&gt;Cynthia when she’s mad.&lt;br /&gt;I know everything but myself.&lt;div class="blogger-post-footer"&gt;&lt;img width='1' height='1' src='https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/tracker/6926938288565421615-4026703728034945309?l=johnhayschoolpoetry.blogspot.com' alt='' /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;</content><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://johnhayschoolpoetry.blogspot.com/feeds/4026703728034945309/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://www.blogger.com/comment.g?blogID=6926938288565421615&amp;postID=4026703728034945309' title='4 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/6926938288565421615/posts/default/4026703728034945309'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/6926938288565421615/posts/default/4026703728034945309'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://johnhayschoolpoetry.blogspot.com/2008/04/what-we-know.html' title='What We Know'/><author><name>LVP</name><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='16' height='16' src='http://img2.blogblog.com/img/b16-rounded.gif'/></author><thr:total>4</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6926938288565421615.post-4679408860959166393</id><published>2008-04-03T12:20:00.000-07:00</published><updated>2008-04-03T12:28:39.280-07:00</updated><title type='text'>So many summers</title><content type='html'>Today we read "Knoxville, Tennessee" by Nikki Giovanni.  We talked about the music in this poem, and how it painted a vivid picture of summer in one particular location.  I asked the students to write about their favorite season in a particular place.  Like Giovanni, many of the students like summer best.  See their work!&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;span style="font-weight: bold;"&gt;Ms. Cole 6th grade&lt;/span&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;span style="font-weight: bold;"&gt;Summer&lt;/span&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;span style="font-weight: bold;"&gt;Markeesh M.&lt;/span&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;I like summer because you get to go&lt;br /&gt;out and play and get wet with&lt;br /&gt;all of your friends and eat lots of&lt;br /&gt;ice cream sandwiches we can&lt;br /&gt;stay outside late and we don’t&lt;br /&gt;have to go to school we get&lt;br /&gt;to go swimming and riding&lt;br /&gt;our bikes we get to jump rope&lt;br /&gt;and play we get to eat water-&lt;br /&gt;melons, freeze pops, oranges, cherries,&lt;br /&gt;snow balls, icy cups I get to&lt;br /&gt;eat a lot of good food and fruits&lt;br /&gt;in the summer you can go&lt;br /&gt;to the zoo and see lots of animals.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;span style="font-weight: bold;"&gt;Memphis&lt;/span&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;span style="font-weight: bold;"&gt;Jameena S.&lt;/span&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Summer, I like summer because&lt;br /&gt;it is hot and you do not have&lt;br /&gt;to wear a coat, boots and&lt;br /&gt;hot pants.  I like summer because&lt;br /&gt;I love to eat the cold, sticky&lt;br /&gt;ice-cream, you have no school,&lt;br /&gt;the kids can go out and play&lt;br /&gt;and jump rope, go swimming and&lt;br /&gt;throw water balloons and do&lt;br /&gt;much much more.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;span style="font-weight: bold;"&gt;Summer&lt;/span&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;span style="font-weight: bold;"&gt;Starcy F.&lt;/span&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;My favorite season is summer&lt;br /&gt;I like summer because of the warm&lt;br /&gt;days relaxed go swim and go&lt;br /&gt;on lots of vacations summer&lt;br /&gt;is my favorite ‘cause kids playing&lt;br /&gt;flower spouts no school and&lt;br /&gt;stay outside late and have&lt;br /&gt;fun get togethers a barbeque&lt;br /&gt;and listen to some gospel music&lt;br /&gt;and food, corn bread, macaroni, greens&lt;br /&gt;cabbage, spaghetti, chicken, hot dog&lt;br /&gt;and cake, ice cream, cheesecake, peach&lt;br /&gt;cobbler, and juice pop that’s why&lt;br /&gt;I pick summer.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;span style="font-weight: bold;"&gt;Ms. Harris 6th grade&lt;/span&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;span style="font-weight: bold;"&gt;Summer&lt;/span&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;span style="font-weight: bold;"&gt;Alexis G.&lt;/span&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;I always like summer best&lt;br /&gt;I can play outside and&lt;br /&gt;watch the flowers grow&lt;br /&gt;I can go to many fun places&lt;br /&gt;I do not have to go to school&lt;br /&gt;my birthday is in the summer&lt;br /&gt;and barbeque outside&lt;br /&gt;I can go to house parties&lt;br /&gt;with my best friends and all&lt;br /&gt;I can do is have a lot of&lt;br /&gt;fun.  But then it’s a time when&lt;br /&gt;the fun stops until next year&lt;br /&gt;or in the winter, fall, spring you&lt;br /&gt;can keep going but&lt;br /&gt;then it’s a time to have to sleep.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;span style="font-weight: bold;"&gt;Summer&lt;/span&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;span style="font-weight: bold;"&gt;Porscha T.&lt;/span&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;I always love summer&lt;br /&gt;best smells good&lt;br /&gt;barbeque eat fresh fruit&lt;br /&gt;love all the good&lt;br /&gt;things you could do&lt;br /&gt;outside you go&lt;br /&gt;get in the pool have lots&lt;br /&gt;of fun parties pool parties&lt;br /&gt;no school stay up all&lt;br /&gt;night.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;span style="font-weight: bold;"&gt;I Like . . . &lt;/span&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;span style="font-weight: bold;"&gt;Briana J.&lt;/span&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;I like summer in&lt;br /&gt;Florida and all the&lt;br /&gt;rides in Orlando where&lt;br /&gt;I can go on.&lt;br /&gt;When it is a&lt;br /&gt;church picnic I&lt;br /&gt;have fun and&lt;br /&gt;play with friends&lt;br /&gt;and listen to gospel&lt;br /&gt;music.  But it gets&lt;br /&gt;so hot I can&lt;br /&gt;use a glass of&lt;br /&gt;lemonade, and&lt;br /&gt;going on tall rides&lt;br /&gt;is scary, but&lt;br /&gt;they're fun&lt;br /&gt;wind going&lt;br /&gt;through my&lt;br /&gt;hair I like&lt;br /&gt;it.  But when&lt;br /&gt;I come back&lt;br /&gt;to Chi town&lt;br /&gt;I hang out&lt;br /&gt;with my friends&lt;br /&gt;at the park.&lt;br /&gt;Oh look!  There’s&lt;br /&gt;Micheal and&lt;br /&gt;Latisha and Daymiss&lt;br /&gt;and more friends&lt;br /&gt;playing they see&lt;br /&gt;me and say:  heeeeeey&lt;br /&gt;Briana then I&lt;br /&gt;go play.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;span style="font-weight: bold;"&gt;Ms. Kessinger 6th grade&lt;/span&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;span style="font-weight: bold;"&gt;Six Flags in the Summer&lt;/span&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;span style="font-weight: bold;"&gt;Tysheanna Funches&lt;/span&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Rides, rides, rides!&lt;br /&gt;Summer, summer summer!&lt;br /&gt;Food, food, food!&lt;br /&gt;Batman, superman, giant drop and much more&lt;br /&gt;hot, no coast, swimming suits and much more&lt;br /&gt;ice cram, hot dogs, cheesy fries and much more&lt;br /&gt;summer’s the best&lt;br /&gt;six flag’s the best&lt;br /&gt;walking under mist when you get hot&lt;br /&gt;screaming as loud as you can&lt;br /&gt;no rules like no talking always wear a helmet&lt;br /&gt;swimming all day facing big waves&lt;br /&gt;looking at your mom screaming on rides&lt;br /&gt;laughing when you drop on the giant drop&lt;br /&gt;running around&lt;br /&gt;hot band around your toes&lt;br /&gt;barefoot running around&lt;br /&gt;this is six flags in the summer&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;span style="font-weight: bold;"&gt;Summer in Chicago&lt;/span&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;span style="font-weight: bold;"&gt;Sherrell W.&lt;/span&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;As the remains of the rain clear&lt;br /&gt;the sun rises from its home&lt;br /&gt;waiting for this beautiful&lt;br /&gt;season.  As the sun hurries to&lt;br /&gt;the sky it flashes on&lt;br /&gt;beautiful Chicago. Kids are&lt;br /&gt;coming grabbing books before . . .&lt;br /&gt;&lt;span style="font-style: italic;"&gt;Ring Ring&lt;/span&gt; the school bell rings&lt;br /&gt;like a freedom bell for a war.  You&lt;br /&gt;smelling BBQ, corn, chicken, and laughter&lt;br /&gt;as everyone enjoys the summer&lt;br /&gt;awakening.  Put away coats, boots&lt;br /&gt;umbrellas and the thought of&lt;br /&gt;spring.  Summer has come to&lt;br /&gt;Chicago.  Time for fun.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;span style="font-weight: bold;"&gt;Summertime in Joliet&lt;/span&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;span style="font-weight: bold;"&gt;Jasmine W.&lt;/span&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;I always like summer&lt;br /&gt;time in Joliet because&lt;br /&gt;I can eat&lt;br /&gt;some good barbeque&lt;br /&gt;I can sleep all day&lt;br /&gt;I can play and&lt;br /&gt;get more food if I&lt;br /&gt;really need it.  I drink&lt;br /&gt;juice pop and other&lt;br /&gt;kinds for my age.&lt;br /&gt;That’s my favorite season.&lt;div class="blogger-post-footer"&gt;&lt;img width='1' height='1' src='https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/tracker/6926938288565421615-4679408860959166393?l=johnhayschoolpoetry.blogspot.com' alt='' /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;</content><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://johnhayschoolpoetry.blogspot.com/feeds/4679408860959166393/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://www.blogger.com/comment.g?blogID=6926938288565421615&amp;postID=4679408860959166393' title='0 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/6926938288565421615/posts/default/4679408860959166393'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/6926938288565421615/posts/default/4679408860959166393'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://johnhayschoolpoetry.blogspot.com/2008/04/so-many-summers.html' title='So many summers'/><author><name>LVP</name><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='16' height='16' src='http://img2.blogblog.com/img/b16-rounded.gif'/></author><thr:total>0</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6926938288565421615.post-8838575735488118976</id><published>2008-03-27T13:10:00.001-07:00</published><updated>2008-03-27T13:13:37.049-07:00</updated><title type='text'>History (in third person)</title><content type='html'>Today we read Tomaz Salamun's poem "History." We talked about writing in third person to gain some distance and a new perspective. We also talked about how imagining one's own history could be interesting, especially when the poet chooses vivid images. The students wrote great poems of their own imagined histories. Take a look!&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;span style="font-weight:bold;"&gt;Ms. Cole 6th grade&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;span style="font-weight:bold;"&gt;History&lt;br /&gt;Andrea T.&lt;/span&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Andrea is a sphere rushing through &lt;br /&gt;the air. Andrea is a girl who, when&lt;br /&gt;she walks down the street, people&lt;br /&gt;look at her.  She lies down in&lt;br /&gt;twilight.  Andrea has a dog and&lt;br /&gt;is a girl.  She likes the rain.  She&lt;br /&gt;likes to go to Miami.  Andrea is like&lt;br /&gt;the wind.  Andrea likes hot peppers.&lt;br /&gt;Andrea does not like snakes.  Andrea &lt;br /&gt;has never been in a tornado or hurricane&lt;br /&gt;and sometimes she thinks she is &lt;br /&gt;a refreshing person.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;span style="font-weight:bold;"&gt;Rahkeem is?&lt;br /&gt;Rahkeem O.&lt;/span&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Rahkeem is a giant bowling&lt;br /&gt;ball knocking down and conquering everything&lt;br /&gt;in its path.  He never gets afraid or&lt;br /&gt;backs down from a challenge.&lt;br /&gt;Or maybe Rahkeem is like a&lt;br /&gt;cool summer mist.  After a long day&lt;br /&gt;it is refreshing to see one.&lt;br /&gt;Or, Rahkeem might be a &lt;br /&gt;Fierce Tiger, always ready and prepared&lt;br /&gt;for anything.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;span style="font-weight:bold;"&gt;History&lt;br /&gt;Takayla J.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Takayla is a sun.&lt;br /&gt;Takayla is a spotlight&lt;br /&gt;shining on a superstar.&lt;br /&gt;She lies down like a&lt;br /&gt;sunset.&lt;br /&gt;People and I look as if&lt;br /&gt;our eyes are flashlights.&lt;br /&gt;Maybe she’s a star&lt;br /&gt;from the sky.  &lt;br /&gt;Possibly she should be a &lt;br /&gt;highlighter.&lt;br /&gt;Next year, she’ll be &lt;br /&gt;in the Bahamas where&lt;br /&gt;Takayla shines on people.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;span style="font-weight:bold;"&gt;Ms. Harris 6th grade&lt;/span&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;span style="font-weight:bold;"&gt;History&lt;br /&gt;Omarr B.&lt;/span&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Omarr is a king.&lt;br /&gt;Omarr is a sun rising&lt;br /&gt;every 6:00 a.m.  He hops like &lt;br /&gt;a rabbit, and runs fast like it&lt;br /&gt;too.  People and I, we all look&lt;br /&gt;at him shocked.  We give him luck.&lt;br /&gt;Maybe he is a bird.  Maybe he is a &lt;br /&gt;mouse or a dog that only bites&lt;br /&gt;bad people.  People see Omarr buying a car.  &lt;br /&gt;He buys it and thinks of history.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;span style="font-weight:bold;"&gt;Poetry&lt;br /&gt;Malik T.&lt;/span&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Malik is a tree.&lt;br /&gt;Maybe he is a thunderstorm. &lt;br /&gt;Possibly he should be a pit bull.&lt;br /&gt;Next year, he will be an angel.&lt;br /&gt;Maybe he is a fast car.&lt;br /&gt;Maybe he is a chair so that &lt;br /&gt;you can sit.&lt;br /&gt;Possibly he should have been a lemon&lt;br /&gt;that is sour.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;span style="font-weight:bold;"&gt;KeJuan the Invisible&lt;br /&gt;KeJuan M.&lt;/span&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;KeJuan is a beast. KeJuan&lt;br /&gt;is a monster. KeJuan is the air &lt;br /&gt;that flows in the earth, that&lt;br /&gt;people inhale and exhale. KeJuan&lt;br /&gt;is the thunder that strikes a&lt;br /&gt;tree falling on cars. KeJuan&lt;br /&gt;is a beast. KeJuan is hurricane&lt;br /&gt;Katrina that hit New Orleans. KeJuan&lt;br /&gt;is like John C.  You can’t see him. You&lt;br /&gt;can only hear, smell or taste KeJuan&lt;br /&gt;because he is like a burger flipping&lt;br /&gt;in the pan. KeJuan is the energy&lt;br /&gt;that you drink. That is how I explain&lt;br /&gt;KeJuan and KeJuan is what you can’t see.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;span style="font-weight:bold;"&gt;Ms. Kessinger 6th grade&lt;/span&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;span style="font-weight:bold;"&gt;What’s History&lt;br /&gt;Eric. W&lt;/span&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Eric is a king.  A lion.&lt;br /&gt;A block of sunshine a light&lt;br /&gt;that doesn’t go off like a glass&lt;br /&gt;star.  Music.  A clock that&lt;br /&gt;doesn’t have numbers.&lt;br /&gt;Eric is an Independent man&lt;br /&gt;that loves his work, &lt;br /&gt;going for his goals.  That is&lt;br /&gt;history.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;span style="font-weight:bold;"&gt;History&lt;br /&gt;Keyonna B.&lt;/span&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Keyonna is goofy.&lt;br /&gt;Keyonna is a shoe addict.&lt;br /&gt;Keyonna is a tree climber.&lt;br /&gt;Maybe she is a nice person.&lt;br /&gt;Maybe she is a rude person.&lt;br /&gt;She might only be kind.&lt;br /&gt;She might only be cute.&lt;br /&gt;Keyonna is crazy.&lt;br /&gt;Keyonna is lazy.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;span style="font-weight:bold;"&gt;Poem&lt;br /&gt;Chaddrick M.&lt;/span&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Chaddrick is a leopard.&lt;br /&gt;He is a snowstorm.&lt;br /&gt;He might only be&lt;br /&gt;two dogs going at it.&lt;br /&gt;Possibly he should be&lt;br /&gt;waves when people &lt;br /&gt;are surfing.&lt;br /&gt;People will say:  I am&lt;br /&gt;going to get security,&lt;br /&gt;because he is a&lt;br /&gt;bad boy.&lt;div class="blogger-post-footer"&gt;&lt;img width='1' height='1' src='https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/tracker/6926938288565421615-8838575735488118976?l=johnhayschoolpoetry.blogspot.com' alt='' /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;</content><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://johnhayschoolpoetry.blogspot.com/feeds/8838575735488118976/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://www.blogger.com/comment.g?blogID=6926938288565421615&amp;postID=8838575735488118976' title='0 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/6926938288565421615/posts/default/8838575735488118976'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/6926938288565421615/posts/default/8838575735488118976'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://johnhayschoolpoetry.blogspot.com/2008/03/history-in-third-person.html' title='History (in third person)'/><author><name>LVP</name><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='16' height='16' src='http://img2.blogblog.com/img/b16-rounded.gif'/></author><thr:total>0</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6926938288565421615.post-2731097448283151181</id><published>2008-03-13T11:49:00.000-07:00</published><updated>2008-03-13T11:53:12.437-07:00</updated><title type='text'>Crazy Adorations</title><content type='html'>Today we read an excerpt of Andre Breton's "Free Union." We talked about the power of metaphor and discussed the strange and surprising way Breton describes his wife. We made a list of unusual parts of the body that might go mostly unexamined, and created a list of unrelated nouns. Then, when asked to think of someone they adore, students came up with many exciting comparisons. Read their work!&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Ms. Cole 6th grade&lt;br /&gt;Week 14&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;My Friend&lt;br /&gt;Daveon J.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;My friend whose toes are a pack of string beans,&lt;br /&gt;whose neck is like a big professional&lt;br /&gt;football whose armpits are like a bush&lt;br /&gt;of hair, whose eyeballs are like two&lt;br /&gt;big bowling balls, whose ears are like&lt;br /&gt;two airplane wings.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;My Brother&lt;br /&gt;William D.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;My brother is a cricket then&lt;br /&gt;a hill billy snail and has an elbow of&lt;br /&gt;a goat.  His voice is louder&lt;br /&gt;than a lion’s roar.  He has hair of&lt;br /&gt;alligator skin and a body made&lt;br /&gt;of bricks.  And eyelashes of a horse’s&lt;br /&gt;tail.  He moves faster than the wind.&lt;br /&gt;This is my brother.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Mother&lt;br /&gt;Miguel A.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;My mom whose hair is like a river of gold&lt;br /&gt;whose mouth is like a rainy puffy clouds&lt;br /&gt;whose teeth are white as snow&lt;br /&gt;whose tongue is made of sharpened stainless steel.&lt;br /&gt;My mom whose eyelashes are like the&lt;br /&gt;Statue of Liberty’s seven spikes a little bit bent&lt;br /&gt;whose eyebrows are not as bushy as kiwi.&lt;br /&gt;My mom whose heart is a big open door&lt;br /&gt;for everyone &lt;br /&gt;and my mom’s fingers that are as &lt;br /&gt;soft as stones on the beach.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Ms. Harris 6th grade&lt;br /&gt;Week 14&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Mom&lt;br /&gt;Michael B.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;My mom has eyes of roses&lt;br /&gt;teeth like snow.&lt;br /&gt;My mom has hair like a condo&lt;br /&gt;ears like rain.&lt;br /&gt;My mom’s nose is like trees&lt;br /&gt;her lips like a sunflower.&lt;br /&gt;My mom’s skin in like a condo&lt;br /&gt;her breath like a fountain of chocolate.&lt;br /&gt;My mom’s toes are a river&lt;br /&gt;her forehead is like snow.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;My Cousin&lt;br /&gt;Dequan B.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;My cousin smells like sunflowers,&lt;br /&gt;she looks like a tree.  My mom&lt;br /&gt;smells like roses.  My baby&lt;br /&gt;sister’s cheeks smell like &lt;br /&gt;sweet candy.  She looks &lt;br /&gt;like a baby lion when she cries.&lt;br /&gt;It looks like she was in a puddle &lt;br /&gt;of rain.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Crazy Body Parts&lt;br /&gt;Latisha M.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;I admire a person whose&lt;br /&gt;forehead is like a river&lt;br /&gt;whose hair is like a ball&lt;br /&gt;of itchy grass whose&lt;br /&gt;neck is like a skyscraper&lt;br /&gt;whose shoulders are like chocolate&lt;br /&gt;milk coming out of a fountain&lt;br /&gt;whose waist is like fish swimming&lt;br /&gt;in the ocean &lt;br /&gt;whose hands are like waving&lt;br /&gt;flags whose legs are tall as trees&lt;br /&gt;and whose toes are like roses.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Ms. Kessinger 6th grade&lt;br /&gt;Week 14&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;My Twin&lt;br /&gt;Justina P.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;My twin who has a mouth of birds&lt;br /&gt;who has energy of a 3-year-old&lt;br /&gt;who has skin of a baby&lt;br /&gt;my twin who has legs of a model&lt;br /&gt;who has moods of a mood rings&lt;br /&gt;who has skin the color of light chocolate&lt;br /&gt;my twin who has clothes of flowers&lt;br /&gt;who has eyes of a brown star&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;My Brother&lt;br /&gt;Johnny B.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;My brother whose shoulders&lt;br /&gt;are fountains of chocolate&lt;br /&gt;whose belly button is a block&lt;br /&gt;whose legs are long as&lt;br /&gt;the numbers 1, 2, and 3&lt;br /&gt;whose teeth are white as snow&lt;br /&gt;whose tongue is longer than trees&lt;br /&gt;whose stomach is full as chocolate&lt;br /&gt;my brother’s forehead is smaller&lt;br /&gt;than windex paper towels&lt;br /&gt;whose fingers can write a&lt;br /&gt;response in seconds&lt;br /&gt;whose cheeks are shiny as&lt;br /&gt;the sun&lt;br /&gt;whose elbow is rusty as nails&lt;br /&gt;whose tongue twirls like a cyclone&lt;br /&gt;whose ankles twist like a screwdriver&lt;br /&gt;whose eyes are smaller than pop cans&lt;br /&gt;whose eyes can see like posters&lt;br /&gt;whose face is on a dollar bill of money&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Everything in the Body&lt;br /&gt;Brianna D.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;My mom has a face made&lt;br /&gt;out of money.&lt;br /&gt;She’s getting rich.&lt;br /&gt;My mom has ankles made out&lt;br /&gt;of chocolate, she’s &lt;br /&gt;walking slow.  &lt;br /&gt;My mom’s toes are made of&lt;br /&gt;blocks.&lt;br /&gt;She’s falling down.&lt;br /&gt;My mom’s ears are made of flowers.&lt;br /&gt;She can’t hear.&lt;br /&gt;My mom’s forehead is made &lt;br /&gt;out of snow.&lt;br /&gt;She gets a brain freeze.&lt;div class="blogger-post-footer"&gt;&lt;img width='1' height='1' src='https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/tracker/6926938288565421615-2731097448283151181?l=johnhayschoolpoetry.blogspot.com' alt='' /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;</content><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://johnhayschoolpoetry.blogspot.com/feeds/2731097448283151181/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://www.blogger.com/comment.g?blogID=6926938288565421615&amp;postID=2731097448283151181' title='0 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/6926938288565421615/posts/default/2731097448283151181'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/6926938288565421615/posts/default/2731097448283151181'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://johnhayschoolpoetry.blogspot.com/2008/03/crazy-adorations.html' title='Crazy Adorations'/><author><name>LVP</name><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='16' height='16' src='http://img2.blogblog.com/img/b16-rounded.gif'/></author><thr:total>0</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6926938288565421615.post-4411093483434739238</id><published>2008-02-22T12:01:00.001-08:00</published><updated>2008-02-22T12:04:27.795-08:00</updated><title type='text'>Sweet Like a ????</title><content type='html'>Today we read Michael Ondaatje's poem "Sweet Like a Crow." The students really gained an understanding of comparison/simile and were very excited about the surprising and strange associations this poem offered. The students then began to imagine how a voice might sound and came up with comparison's of their own. They had many surprising images!&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Ms. Cole 6th grade&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Your Voice&lt;br /&gt;Kenya W.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Your voice sounds like eight dogs&lt;br /&gt;barking, thunder in the sky,&lt;br /&gt;a bullet hit you in eye,&lt;br /&gt;one hundred owls in tree, &lt;br /&gt;a tornado heading our way, two&lt;br /&gt;thousand firecrackers hitting &lt;br /&gt;the y sky, people dancing in a parade,&lt;br /&gt;a burning house, a scary movie, a car&lt;br /&gt;out of gas, a bulldozer&lt;br /&gt;knocking down a building, a phone &lt;br /&gt;ringing, a girl lost in a desert&lt;br /&gt;crying for help, five girls jumping&lt;br /&gt;on a bed.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Your Voice&lt;br /&gt;Keegan O.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Your voice sounds like a high-pitched&lt;br /&gt;bird in a nest on a summer morning.  Your&lt;br /&gt;voice is like a slave being beaten.  Your &lt;br /&gt;voice sounds like a windshield wiper,&lt;br /&gt;wiping snow off of the windows, your&lt;br /&gt;voice sounds like a hurricane&lt;br /&gt;in the sky picking up speed.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Voices&lt;br /&gt;Damyiss M.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Somebody’s voice sounds like &lt;br /&gt;it is on a cloud, it sounds like &lt;br /&gt;a snake being fed to a killer whale,&lt;br /&gt;it sounds like a squirrel being eaten&lt;br /&gt;by a giant crow, it sound like a &lt;br /&gt;little girl screaming for help it &lt;br /&gt;sounds like someone being shot, it &lt;br /&gt;sounds like someone in a blizzard,&lt;br /&gt;it sounds like someone biting&lt;br /&gt;into a fried green tomato, it &lt;br /&gt;sounds like a girl being beat,&lt;br /&gt;her hair getting combed.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Ms. Harris 6th grade&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Your Voice&lt;br /&gt;Marquis S.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Your voice sounds like a&lt;br /&gt;bed squeaking, like a horse&lt;br /&gt;eating hay, like a car&lt;br /&gt;riding on a flat tire,&lt;br /&gt;like a boy knocking over&lt;br /&gt;garbage cans, like a car&lt;br /&gt;rolling over, like a baby crying,&lt;br /&gt;like someone biting a piece&lt;br /&gt;off an apple.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Your Voice Sounds Like&lt;br /&gt;Edward S.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Your voice sound like&lt;br /&gt;a fish getting cooked.&lt;br /&gt;Your voice sounds like&lt;br /&gt;a monkey jumping up&lt;br /&gt;and down.  Your voice&lt;br /&gt;sounds like a cat crying.&lt;br /&gt;Your voice sounds &lt;br /&gt;like a dog biting. Your&lt;br /&gt;voice sounds like a&lt;br /&gt;fat man eating.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Her Voice&lt;br /&gt;Carisma F.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Her voice sounds like a piece of fried chicken&lt;br /&gt;being eaten, a tornado being brought threw&lt;br /&gt;town, like a chip bag being opened, like a bitten&lt;br /&gt;apple.  Her voice sounds like a bird being &lt;br /&gt;choked, like a basketball being bounced, like&lt;br /&gt;hail coming down and hitting the windows.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Her voice sounds like a loud TV.  Like a ring&lt;br /&gt;tone on a phone, like two cats and two dogs&lt;br /&gt;fighting.  Like a gun being shot in the air,&lt;br /&gt;like a bird flying in the sky. Her voice&lt;br /&gt;sounds like a rooster early in the morning,&lt;br /&gt;like an ambulance, like kids running &lt;br /&gt;through the halls of the school.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Your Voice&lt;br /&gt;Laquesha B.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Your voice sounds like a &lt;br /&gt;watermelon when someone is &lt;br /&gt;throwing and dropping it.  Your voice&lt;br /&gt;sounds like a laughing dog that&lt;br /&gt;is at a talent show.  Your voice sounds like &lt;br /&gt;a notebook when someone opens it and flips&lt;br /&gt;the pages.  Your voice sound like a &lt;br /&gt;big bag of chips when someone drops it&lt;br /&gt;and another person steps on it.  Your voice&lt;br /&gt;sounds like a paper wobbling front and back&lt;br /&gt;and from side to side.  Your voice sounds&lt;br /&gt;like a piece of pie when somebody ate the &lt;br /&gt;whole thing in one bite.  Your voice&lt;br /&gt;sounds like a Mama hollering and telling&lt;br /&gt;her children to go to bed.  Your voice sounds like &lt;br /&gt;a lawnmower getting stuck between houses.  Your voice&lt;br /&gt;sounds like two dogs and cats fighting each other.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Voice&lt;br /&gt;Arrion L.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;I sound like a hand clap&lt;br /&gt;going across someone’s face.&lt;br /&gt;I sound like a rock falling&lt;br /&gt;onto the ground.  I sound like&lt;br /&gt;a man running from &lt;br /&gt;the police.  I sound like a &lt;br /&gt;dog trying to get a ball.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Ms. Kessinger 6th grade&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Your Voice&lt;br /&gt;Eric W.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Your voice sound like trees falling and the leaves falling off&lt;br /&gt;and blowing sometimes like in the Windy City&lt;br /&gt;and water hitting rock.  Your voice sounds like a coat zipper&lt;br /&gt;that is broken.  Like someone getting married.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Your Voice&lt;br /&gt;Dominique B.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Your voice sounds like a&lt;br /&gt;lawn mower cutting grass.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Your voice sounds like a&lt;br /&gt;clock going tic-toc.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Your voice sounds like a&lt;br /&gt;whale eating a fish.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Your voice sounds like a&lt;br /&gt;dog running from a bath.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Your voice sounds like a&lt;br /&gt;hyena scaring a baby lion.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Your voice sounds like a&lt;br /&gt;daddy lion roaring.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Your voice sounds like a&lt;br /&gt;1-year-old saying his ABCs.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Your voice sounds like a&lt;br /&gt;dice rolling on the board.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Your voice sounds like a&lt;br /&gt;sick kid.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Your Voice Sounds Like&lt;br /&gt;Amia R.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Your voice sounds like&lt;br /&gt;a pig screaming for&lt;br /&gt;help and a rain storm.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Your voice sounds like&lt;br /&gt;an elephant blowing&lt;br /&gt;his horn going crazy.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Your voice sounds like&lt;br /&gt;a dolphin crying &lt;br /&gt;for her baby.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Your voice sounds like&lt;br /&gt;a clock saying&lt;br /&gt;tick tock.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Your voice sounds like&lt;br /&gt;a frog trying to sing.&lt;div class="blogger-post-footer"&gt;&lt;img width='1' height='1' src='https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/tracker/6926938288565421615-4411093483434739238?l=johnhayschoolpoetry.blogspot.com' alt='' /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;</content><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://johnhayschoolpoetry.blogspot.com/feeds/4411093483434739238/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://www.blogger.com/comment.g?blogID=6926938288565421615&amp;postID=4411093483434739238' title='0 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/6926938288565421615/posts/default/4411093483434739238'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/6926938288565421615/posts/default/4411093483434739238'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://johnhayschoolpoetry.blogspot.com/2008/02/sweet-like.html' title='Sweet Like a ????'/><author><name>LVP</name><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='16' height='16' src='http://img2.blogblog.com/img/b16-rounded.gif'/></author><thr:total>0</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6926938288565421615.post-780334794071258019</id><published>2008-02-14T12:24:00.000-08:00</published><updated>2008-02-14T12:31:13.056-08:00</updated><title type='text'>Emotion Personification Party</title><content type='html'>This week we read "Shame" by Nancy Casteneda and "Fear" by Tracy Waldman.  The students and I discussed personification, and then made a list of some emotions we might want to explore.  We talked about how, if the emotion was a person, it would look, act, etc.  A few student volunteers had a good time acting this out and entering the room as their emotion.  Then, they used their own powers to transform their emotion into a person via words:&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Ms. Cole 6th grade&lt;br /&gt;Week 12&lt;br /&gt;02/14/08&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Rude&lt;br /&gt;written by: Ms. Cole&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Rude is flippant&lt;br /&gt;and inappropriate.  She&lt;br /&gt;smiles slyly.  She&lt;br /&gt;bursts on the scene&lt;br /&gt;loud and boisterous&lt;br /&gt;not knowing what to&lt;br /&gt;do.  Rude red ridiculous&lt;br /&gt;ready for everything&lt;br /&gt;prepared for nothing.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Joy&lt;br /&gt;Louise D.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Joy is a girl who&lt;br /&gt;is happy all the time, loves&lt;br /&gt;to play, loves to sing, she loves&lt;br /&gt;to eat hot dogs.  She loves to hear&lt;br /&gt;the sound of a bird singing in&lt;br /&gt;the morning.  Joy loves to smell good.&lt;br /&gt;Joy loves to see pretty clothes.&lt;br /&gt;Joy loves to feel good.  Joy is&lt;br /&gt;a girl who loves to be happy.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Excitement&lt;br /&gt;Arquesha A.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Excitement is a child&lt;br /&gt;eating ice cream, running&lt;br /&gt;down a hill, playing with&lt;br /&gt;other kids, having fun&lt;br /&gt;in the sun.  Excitement&lt;br /&gt;is making cookies,&lt;br /&gt;cake and other kinds&lt;br /&gt;of desserts.  Going&lt;br /&gt;to a birthday party and &lt;br /&gt;is always walking in the room&lt;br /&gt;with a smile on her face.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Joy&lt;br /&gt;Miguel A.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Joy is a little boy who has fun all&lt;br /&gt;year round.  He comes out of the sky&lt;br /&gt;every day you do something good.&lt;br /&gt;He has been real happy these&lt;br /&gt;past few days, because you succeeded.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Joy confronts you like a friendly&lt;br /&gt;dog being sensitive to you.&lt;br /&gt;Joy makes you be happy and excited.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Be careful!  If you are not joyful,&lt;br /&gt;he’ll hunt you down and get you&lt;br /&gt;to be joyful.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Ms. Harris 6th grade&lt;br /&gt;Week 12&lt;br /&gt;02/14/08&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Scary&lt;br /&gt;Rayumos H.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Scary is a man who&lt;br /&gt;creeps around like a&lt;br /&gt;worm.  He comes out &lt;br /&gt;of nowhere scaring&lt;br /&gt;kids when it’s night.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Scary has a mask on&lt;br /&gt;and goes into people’s &lt;br /&gt;dreams and makes them&lt;br /&gt;into nightmares.  Scary&lt;br /&gt;demands to see people&lt;br /&gt;get scared or he keeps hunting&lt;br /&gt;you down.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Be scared!  Scary is &lt;br /&gt;after you every single&lt;br /&gt;night between time &lt;br /&gt;and future.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Grumpy&lt;br /&gt;Cleorra G.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;He comes in the room and is&lt;br /&gt;mad at what you do.  He eats&lt;br /&gt;nails and makes you grumpy.&lt;br /&gt;When he walks in, he looks at &lt;br /&gt;everyone with a mean look.  He &lt;br /&gt;will say something mean to make&lt;br /&gt;you mean.  Grumpy also talks&lt;br /&gt;about you.  You can see him&lt;br /&gt;and talk to him, but if you do&lt;br /&gt;make sure to pray he won’t mess&lt;br /&gt;with you.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Jealousy&lt;br /&gt;Da’shana W.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Jealousy is a girl who&lt;br /&gt;can’t stand to see&lt;br /&gt;somebody looking better&lt;br /&gt;than her.  She’s looking&lt;br /&gt;around and making faces&lt;br /&gt;at everyone she can’t stand&lt;br /&gt;to see people look at her.&lt;br /&gt;she’s mighty, scary, &lt;br /&gt;suspicious, shy, honestly&lt;br /&gt;she can be grumpy at times.&lt;br /&gt;She can have joy and happiness&lt;br /&gt;too, but she’s jealous of people.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Suspicious&lt;br /&gt;George G.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Suspicious is a man who wears&lt;br /&gt;an overcoat and a mask.  He’s very quiet&lt;br /&gt;and doesn’t draw attention to himself.&lt;br /&gt;He’s always quiet.  He sneaks up on you&lt;br /&gt;and it is like he isn’t even there.&lt;br /&gt;He’s quiet as a mouse.  Suspicious has&lt;br /&gt;secrets in his pockets.  He’s like &lt;br /&gt;a ghost.  He eats secret recipes.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Ms. Kessinger 6th grade&lt;br /&gt;Week 12&lt;br /&gt;02/14/08&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Worry&lt;br /&gt;Deandre M.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Worry is the name&lt;br /&gt;and hating is not&lt;br /&gt;my game.  Worry&lt;br /&gt;sometimes&lt;br /&gt;I worry no&lt;br /&gt;time.  Worry&lt;br /&gt;this that&lt;br /&gt;this that.&lt;br /&gt;Who worry&lt;br /&gt;I sure did&lt;br /&gt;I love you.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Anger&lt;br /&gt;Jacobi D.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Anger is a man whose skin&lt;br /&gt;goes to red.  Anger stands like&lt;br /&gt;a bear growling at something.&lt;br /&gt;Anger tastes like hot peppers.&lt;br /&gt;Anger feels like hell or heat.&lt;br /&gt;Anger smells like burning&lt;br /&gt;wood.  Anger is just anger.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Scared&lt;br /&gt;Rae L.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Scared is a woman at night.&lt;br /&gt;It taps your shoulder and hides behind a tree.&lt;br /&gt;Scared comes out and makes you scream.&lt;br /&gt;Scared eats what he calls a good old scream.&lt;br /&gt;It keeps in his pocket a book of new tricks.&lt;br /&gt;Scared smells like fear.  Scared looks frightened.&lt;br /&gt;When he comes into the room, he jumps on you.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Regret&lt;br /&gt;Dawn H.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Regret is a woman who sneaks up on&lt;br /&gt;you everyday.  She chases you down&lt;br /&gt;the street and holds tight and never&lt;br /&gt;lets go--puts pressure on your back&lt;br /&gt;and pulls you back as you walk, and stays&lt;br /&gt;in your mind each and every day.&lt;div class="blogger-post-footer"&gt;&lt;img width='1' height='1' src='https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/tracker/6926938288565421615-780334794071258019?l=johnhayschoolpoetry.blogspot.com' alt='' /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;</content><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://johnhayschoolpoetry.blogspot.com/feeds/780334794071258019/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://www.blogger.com/comment.g?blogID=6926938288565421615&amp;postID=780334794071258019' title='0 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/6926938288565421615/posts/default/780334794071258019'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/6926938288565421615/posts/default/780334794071258019'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://johnhayschoolpoetry.blogspot.com/2008/02/emotion-personification-party.html' title='Emotion Personification Party'/><author><name>LVP</name><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='16' height='16' src='http://img2.blogblog.com/img/b16-rounded.gif'/></author><thr:total>0</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6926938288565421615.post-2678890964037621363</id><published>2008-01-31T11:40:00.001-08:00</published><updated>2008-01-31T11:45:48.358-08:00</updated><title type='text'>Paint blot comparisons</title><content type='html'>To introduce comparison, the students and I read "Fog" by Carl Sandburg. We had a great discussion about how one thing can be/become another thing. Then, I made a few symmetrical paint blots to help the students discover their own "metaphor magic" to transform one thing into another. See their amazing poems:&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Ms. Cole 6th grade&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Paint&lt;br /&gt;Kenya W.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;This is a spaceship taking up&lt;br /&gt;in the air.&lt;br /&gt;A turkey to share.&lt;br /&gt;This is some flowers in this&lt;br /&gt;beautiful vase.&lt;br /&gt;This is a person’s ribs.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Paint Blues&lt;br /&gt;Lannell F.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;The paintings look like a&lt;br /&gt;rocket blasting off, and a robot&lt;br /&gt;on a toilet and a baby looking&lt;br /&gt;like a roach.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Pots Paint&lt;br /&gt;William D.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;First it was a plain&lt;br /&gt;paper, then it was an&lt;br /&gt;x-ray of the inside of&lt;br /&gt;someone, then it was a&lt;br /&gt;flower in a vase, now it’s&lt;br /&gt;a skeleton with flippers.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Ms. Harris 6th grade&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Heart&lt;br /&gt;Michael B.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;What I see is&lt;br /&gt;two people taking&lt;br /&gt;out someone’s &lt;br /&gt;heart.  The people are&lt;br /&gt;blue.  And the heart &lt;br /&gt;is black and red.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Splash!&lt;br /&gt;George G.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;The paint is like&lt;br /&gt;a man with a mustache,&lt;br /&gt;big red lips, and a blue head.&lt;br /&gt;Or an African mask, or maybe&lt;br /&gt;it is a mouse with black hair&lt;br /&gt;feasting on spaghetti.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Mr. Confusion&lt;br /&gt;Jermel H.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;The painting is blurry,&lt;br /&gt;staring, and curvy.&lt;br /&gt;Mr. Confusion is blue,&lt;br /&gt;his mustache is black,&lt;br /&gt;and his beard is red&lt;br /&gt;and as big as his head.&lt;br /&gt;Mr. Confusion is dreamy, but&lt;br /&gt;chubby and lazy, crazy.&lt;br /&gt;He’s the blue man.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Ms. Kessinger 6th grade&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;What is Paint?&lt;br /&gt;Dominique B.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Paint is a polar bear&lt;br /&gt;with blue and white fur.&lt;br /&gt;Paint is a house on a&lt;br /&gt;lost island.&lt;br /&gt;Paint is a sword going&lt;br /&gt;through a teddy bear.&lt;br /&gt;Paint is two bears&lt;br /&gt;on V-day.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Paint Dreams&lt;br /&gt;Terry C.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;I see a bear running&lt;br /&gt;through the woods fast&lt;br /&gt;as lightening.  A bear&lt;br /&gt;no one has ever seen in life,&lt;br /&gt;but in a dream.  The art&lt;br /&gt;of paint becomes real in&lt;br /&gt;dreams.  That is my paint &lt;br /&gt;dream.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Paint&lt;br /&gt;Virginia E.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;The paint comes as an Indian&lt;br /&gt;woman that can look &lt;br /&gt;all over Chicago and&lt;br /&gt;it can stand in front &lt;br /&gt;of our face and keep&lt;br /&gt;moving.&lt;div class="blogger-post-footer"&gt;&lt;img width='1' height='1' src='https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/tracker/6926938288565421615-2678890964037621363?l=johnhayschoolpoetry.blogspot.com' alt='' /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;</content><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://johnhayschoolpoetry.blogspot.com/feeds/2678890964037621363/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://www.blogger.com/comment.g?blogID=6926938288565421615&amp;postID=2678890964037621363' title='0 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/6926938288565421615/posts/default/2678890964037621363'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/6926938288565421615/posts/default/2678890964037621363'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://johnhayschoolpoetry.blogspot.com/2008/01/paint-blot-comparisons.html' title='Paint blot comparisons'/><author><name>LVP</name><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='16' height='16' src='http://img2.blogblog.com/img/b16-rounded.gif'/></author><thr:total>0</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6926938288565421615.post-8006255637692122429</id><published>2008-01-31T11:35:00.000-08:00</published><updated>2008-01-31T11:40:03.092-08:00</updated><title type='text'>What THEY loved.</title><content type='html'>We read Lisa Jarnot's poem "They Loved Paperclips."  We talked about the advantages of using the third-person collective pronoun  "they" to allow for some distance.  The students began to see that they could write a poem that include not only their own perspective, but could allow for the viewpoint of others.  See their work!&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Ms. Cole 6th grade&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;They Love&lt;br /&gt;Shirlette S.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Thye love their pencil moving&lt;br /&gt;across their paper and &lt;br /&gt;they love the weather when&lt;br /&gt;it changes every day and&lt;br /&gt;they love their eyes moving &lt;br /&gt;from side to side and&lt;br /&gt;they love their fingers moving &lt;br /&gt;one by one and they love their&lt;br /&gt;paper making rapply sounds&lt;br /&gt;and they love their cars&lt;br /&gt;horn as they beep &lt;br /&gt;for someone to move out &lt;br /&gt;of their way and they&lt;br /&gt;love the air because &lt;br /&gt;they get oxygen and they love&lt;br /&gt;their straight&lt;br /&gt;hair as they flat iron&lt;br /&gt;and it pressed out&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Poem&lt;br /&gt;Jameena&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;They love shopping&lt;br /&gt;they love cats and dogs&lt;br /&gt;they love having family&lt;br /&gt;they love working and going to school&lt;br /&gt;they love spending money&lt;br /&gt;the love eating&lt;br /&gt;they love having a roof over their head&lt;br /&gt;that is what they love&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;They Love&lt;br /&gt;William D.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;They love science books&lt;br /&gt;they love the sound of&lt;br /&gt;they wind they love the smell of&lt;br /&gt;chicken fingers and mac &amp; cheese&lt;br /&gt;they like the shape of the &lt;br /&gt;globe they love the smell of&lt;br /&gt;new shoes they love plants.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Poem&lt;br /&gt;Sendalio W.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;They love hearing things on the&lt;br /&gt;radio they like books they like the&lt;br /&gt;sound of cars they like when there&lt;br /&gt;is a word wall they like it when&lt;br /&gt;family and friends come over they&lt;br /&gt;like when kids come over they like&lt;br /&gt;good grades they like video games&lt;br /&gt;they like poetry they like playing&lt;br /&gt;baseball and basketball they like&lt;br /&gt;playing board games.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Ms. Harris 6th grade&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;They Love Outside&lt;br /&gt;Carisma F.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;They love outside and&lt;br /&gt;everything out there&lt;br /&gt;they love hearing cars&lt;br /&gt;honk their horns and&lt;br /&gt;the smell of gasoline&lt;br /&gt;they love hearing the &lt;br /&gt;crickets and crows they &lt;br /&gt;love looking at the sky &lt;br /&gt;to see what they can find like&lt;br /&gt;shapes and animals they&lt;br /&gt;love looking at the big green trees&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Poem&lt;br /&gt;Jermel H.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;They love many things&lt;br /&gt;they love crossword puzzles&lt;br /&gt;they hate cats and they&lt;br /&gt;love art they still love cooking&lt;br /&gt;and really love puzzles and books they&lt;br /&gt;like bike riding on Sundays they&lt;br /&gt;love this and that they love&lt;br /&gt;garbage and love bugs they eat&lt;br /&gt;worms and slugs&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Me and My Friends!&lt;br /&gt;Dequan B.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;They love Hannah &lt;br /&gt;Montana they love&lt;br /&gt;the click of the keyboard&lt;br /&gt;they love hushpuppies they&lt;br /&gt;love rings they love movies&lt;br /&gt;they love airwalks they love&lt;br /&gt;venns they love pizza and &lt;br /&gt;a pool they love to become&lt;br /&gt;a teacher they love to sing they&lt;br /&gt;love to dance they love to &lt;br /&gt;go to the movies they love&lt;br /&gt;pickles they love me too they&lt;br /&gt;also love Fridays and Spongebob.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Ms. Kessinger 6th grade&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Love, Love Love&lt;br /&gt;Lakeya S.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;They love the chalkboard&lt;br /&gt;they love gospel music&lt;br /&gt;they love fights&lt;br /&gt;they love tweety bird&lt;br /&gt;the love crazy people&lt;br /&gt;all these things they love the most&lt;br /&gt;they love Bowow and Chris Brown&lt;br /&gt;they love school&lt;br /&gt;love, love, love is all they say&lt;br /&gt;they love fruit&lt;br /&gt;they love concrete&lt;br /&gt;they love chicken&lt;br /&gt;they love to freeze&lt;br /&gt;they love tornadoes&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;They Love Fabric&lt;br /&gt;Lyneisha F.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;The love needles they love&lt;br /&gt;thread they love seeds and&lt;br /&gt;candy they loved machines&lt;br /&gt;they love the sound &lt;br /&gt;of pencils on paper and&lt;br /&gt;fabric they love the fabric&lt;br /&gt;on Sundays and&lt;br /&gt;they love clothes&lt;br /&gt;that have their name and style&lt;br /&gt;the thread for the needles&lt;br /&gt;the ruler for the thighs and &lt;br /&gt;also when their fashion&lt;br /&gt;are going down the aisle.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;They Love&lt;br /&gt;Moesha T.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;They love tornadoes&lt;br /&gt;they love poems and &lt;br /&gt;strawberries the cars&lt;br /&gt;the fabric the fries the&lt;br /&gt;sound of a hum they love&lt;br /&gt;school on a Saturday they&lt;br /&gt;love computers all through&lt;br /&gt;the week they love the&lt;br /&gt;hairstyles that they wear&lt;br /&gt;Mondays they love the coats&lt;br /&gt;they love the shoes that &lt;br /&gt;match the ceiling and the&lt;br /&gt;Tide they use to clean their&lt;br /&gt;clothes what they love is&lt;br /&gt;Ms. Van’s poems she brings.&lt;div class="blogger-post-footer"&gt;&lt;img width='1' height='1' src='https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/tracker/6926938288565421615-8006255637692122429?l=johnhayschoolpoetry.blogspot.com' alt='' /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;</content><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://johnhayschoolpoetry.blogspot.com/feeds/8006255637692122429/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' 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type='html'>This week, we stepped outside of ourselves to see what kinds of images might be lurking inside of us.  We read "A Boy’s Head" by Miroslav Holub, translated from Czech by Ian Milner.  The students were amazed at what kinds of things represented knowledge and were excited to explore images of their own.  Look at their great work! &lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Ms. Cole 6th grade&lt;br /&gt;Week 8&lt;br /&gt;12/13/07&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Takayla’s Head&lt;br /&gt;Takayla J.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;In it there is a bee buzzing&lt;br /&gt;and a tooth&lt;br /&gt;for my science project.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;And there is a little girl&lt;br /&gt;bugging me&lt;br /&gt;while I don’t want&lt;br /&gt;to be bothered with.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;And there is&lt;br /&gt;an entirely new whole honey nest&lt;br /&gt;an entirely new big wheelcar&lt;br /&gt;an entirely new carnival&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;There is a tree, tree light&lt;br /&gt;bursting&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;There is a spelling word:&lt;br /&gt;pioneer&lt;br /&gt;surgeon&lt;br /&gt;qualified&lt;br /&gt;infection&lt;br /&gt;outrageous&lt;br /&gt;trail blazer&lt;br /&gt;clinic&lt;br /&gt;application&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;independent and more.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;There are chores.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;And it just cannot be ripped&lt;br /&gt;I believe only what cannot be ripped.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;In My Head&lt;br /&gt;Antonio R.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;In it there is the Best Artist.&lt;br /&gt;There is the big spider in town.&lt;br /&gt;There is Spiderman in Chi-Town&lt;br /&gt;saving the town. The is a &lt;br /&gt;picture of 50 cent and &lt;br /&gt;Tony yayo at 50 house.&lt;br /&gt;There is when I first learned how&lt;br /&gt;to ride a bike.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;In My Head&lt;br /&gt;Pierre M.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;In it there is a carrot&lt;br /&gt;There is money&lt;br /&gt;There is a clock&lt;br /&gt;There is my grandfather resting in peace&lt;br /&gt;There is my mother&lt;br /&gt;There is my father&lt;br /&gt;There is my nephew&lt;br /&gt;There is school&lt;br /&gt;There is Christmas coming&lt;br /&gt;There is snow&lt;br /&gt;There is a progress report&lt;br /&gt;There is a dog&lt;br /&gt;There is a needle&lt;br /&gt;There is home, home sweet home&lt;br /&gt;There is a kitchen&lt;br /&gt;There is a mall&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Ms. Harris 6th grade&lt;br /&gt;Week 8&lt;br /&gt;12/13/07&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Da’shana’s Head&lt;br /&gt;Da’shana W.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;In it there is a huge party&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;and there is a ball &lt;br /&gt;game which shall last forever&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;and there is &lt;br /&gt;a concert&lt;br /&gt;an entirely new song&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;There is a pond&lt;br /&gt;streaming&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Clusters&lt;br /&gt;Raymos H.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;In there is earth.&lt;br /&gt;There is Lake Michigan and&lt;br /&gt;its wonders.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;There is land with buildings&lt;br /&gt;and hotels and apartments.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;There are cars roaming around&lt;br /&gt;the street.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;There are entirely new schools&lt;br /&gt;and hospitals.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;And it just cannot be flamed&lt;br /&gt;or stolen.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;In His Head&lt;br /&gt;Nicole H.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;And in his head pop stars.&lt;br /&gt;Doors . . . opening&lt;br /&gt;little kids running out&lt;br /&gt;of the door singing&lt;br /&gt;1.2.3 lock your doors . . . &lt;br /&gt;4.5. pick up toys&lt;br /&gt;grown ups walking away&lt;br /&gt;from rivers.  But never&lt;br /&gt;loved to be a head?&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Ms. Kessinger 6th grade&lt;br /&gt;Week 8&lt;br /&gt;12/13/07&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Jacobi’s Head&lt;br /&gt;Jacobi D.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;In my head I see a box&lt;br /&gt;and a boy that will sit in it.&lt;br /&gt;I see 303 and me going to pass&lt;br /&gt;6th grade.  In there I see&lt;br /&gt;Christmas.  Friends.  Family&lt;br /&gt;having a good time.  In there&lt;br /&gt;I see peace and quiet.  So much peace.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Briana’s Head&lt;br /&gt;Briana D.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;What’s in my head is not&lt;br /&gt;to dread.  I’ve got purple in my&lt;br /&gt;head.  I’ve got a blue shirt,&lt;br /&gt;red socks, some blue jean pants.&lt;br /&gt;Algebra, which is math. A best-&lt;br /&gt;friends necklace, how about you.&lt;br /&gt;A jacket my BFF my wanna be,&lt;br /&gt;are you crazy? I have red in my&lt;br /&gt;head. I’ve dreams that need help.&lt;br /&gt;I see people in my future who&lt;br /&gt;ask to marry, but in my head I’ll&lt;br /&gt;have to carry.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Sherrell’s Head&lt;br /&gt;Sherrell W.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;In it there is&lt;br /&gt;a pink and blue shirt,&lt;br /&gt;and a blue skirt.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;And there is Lil Wayne&lt;br /&gt;with a hat that he&lt;br /&gt;just got.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;And there is &lt;br /&gt;an entirely new boombox&lt;br /&gt;an entirely new book&lt;br /&gt;an entirely new bird.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;There is a stage&lt;br /&gt;which artist’s rap/sing&lt;br /&gt;on.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;There are long yellow&lt;br /&gt;socks.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;There is my walking&lt;br /&gt;down a runway.&lt;br /&gt;There is me on an island&lt;br /&gt;that can’t be removed.&lt;div class="blogger-post-footer"&gt;&lt;img width='1' height='1' src='https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/tracker/6926938288565421615-7443755691647693789?l=johnhayschoolpoetry.blogspot.com' alt='' /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;</content><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://johnhayschoolpoetry.blogspot.com/feeds/7443755691647693789/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://www.blogger.com/comment.g?blogID=6926938288565421615&amp;postID=7443755691647693789' title='1 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/6926938288565421615/posts/default/7443755691647693789'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/6926938288565421615/posts/default/7443755691647693789'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://johnhayschoolpoetry.blogspot.com/2008/01/in-my-head.html' title='In My Head'/><author><name>LVP</name><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='16' height='16' src='http://img2.blogblog.com/img/b16-rounded.gif'/></author><thr:total>1</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6926938288565421615.post-9032797388342671113</id><published>2007-12-06T12:36:00.000-08:00</published><updated>2007-12-06T12:39:47.890-08:00</updated><title type='text'>From T.S. Eliot to Chicago</title><content type='html'>We read T.S. Eliot's first section of the "Preludes" to get a sense of setting in poetry.  Eliot gives concrete and vivid details of a particular place at a particular time.  We discussed the way he described a winter evening in the city at 6'clock.  The students found it to be an interesting assignment to write about their own neighborhoods at an exact time in a specific season.  Look at their work:&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Ms. Cole 6th grade&lt;br /&gt;Week 6&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;4 O’Clock&lt;br /&gt;Starcy F.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;In the summer time after school&lt;br /&gt;kids get out of school be&lt;br /&gt;loud then when they go home&lt;br /&gt;it is quiet out there when&lt;br /&gt;I go to the store I smell &lt;br /&gt;lots of pizza, steak&lt;br /&gt;Chinese food, shrimp, &lt;br /&gt;burgers, fries when I walk&lt;br /&gt;the streets going to the store&lt;br /&gt;I see the CTA bus going by cars&lt;br /&gt;going by lights change people&lt;br /&gt;going to the gas station to buy&lt;br /&gt;gas I watch them as they &lt;br /&gt;go to church going to&lt;br /&gt;the Laundy-mat.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Setting&lt;br /&gt;Markeesh M.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;The summer evening heats up&lt;br /&gt;when kids come home to play&lt;br /&gt;3:00 in the evening&lt;br /&gt;the boring old day ends.&lt;br /&gt;And here comes all the fun.&lt;br /&gt;The playful little children.&lt;br /&gt;People come to get wet.&lt;br /&gt;And water coming down on you.&lt;br /&gt;The water splash.&lt;br /&gt;They get hungry and &lt;br /&gt;smell of chicken and of fries,&lt;br /&gt;everybody rushes to &lt;br /&gt;the restaurants.  And the&lt;br /&gt;summer of fun.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Poetry&lt;br /&gt;Rahkeen O.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;3 o’clock on a summer day.&lt;br /&gt;Kids out of school run and play.&lt;br /&gt;Racing home to take off bookbags,&lt;br /&gt;but a little tired from the work they had.&lt;br /&gt;Going to union jumping in the pool,&lt;br /&gt;but wait, the next day they still have &lt;br /&gt;school.  Racing home before too late.&lt;br /&gt;Get home do homework while they shiver&lt;br /&gt;and shake.  Eat dinner and get in bed.&lt;br /&gt;Now they can rest their heads.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Ms. Harris 6th grade&lt;br /&gt;Week 6&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Summer&lt;br /&gt;Jasmine P.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;The summer evening settles down&lt;br /&gt;I smell BBQ fill the air.&lt;br /&gt;5 o’clock hits and all the kids &lt;br /&gt;come out to play.  While roses bloom&lt;br /&gt;all around, the cars on &lt;br /&gt;the corner honking horns, cars&lt;br /&gt;going by all four ways.  As&lt;br /&gt;the streetlights come on they&lt;br /&gt;all go away.  Hope wakes&lt;br /&gt;up the next day.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;6 O’clock&lt;br /&gt;Alexis G.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;The summer evening.  6 o’clock.&lt;br /&gt;I hear birds chirping and dogs barking&lt;br /&gt;and cats meow.  I smell BBQ chicken,&lt;br /&gt;ribs and lots more stuff.  I see&lt;br /&gt;out the window girls jumping Double&lt;br /&gt;Dutch.  I see people outside moving&lt;br /&gt;their stuff in a moving truck.&lt;br /&gt;I go outside and look up and the &lt;br /&gt;sun is going down.  Then in the&lt;br /&gt;morning the sun shines again.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;3 o’clock&lt;br /&gt;Porsha T.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;during the summertime&lt;br /&gt;sun rise hot day&lt;br /&gt;kids out playing&lt;br /&gt;running school out&lt;br /&gt;summer school’s&lt;br /&gt;still in kids having&lt;br /&gt;fun swimming staying&lt;br /&gt;up late sleeping late&lt;br /&gt;doing what they&lt;br /&gt;want to do because &lt;br /&gt;school’s out&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Ms. Kessinger 6th grade&lt;br /&gt;Week 6&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt; &lt;br /&gt;6:00 p.m.&lt;br /&gt;Rae L.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Winter is here and it is &lt;br /&gt;so beautiful.  6 o’clock &lt;br /&gt;on the dot.  The tall while&lt;br /&gt;snow formed into a hill.&lt;br /&gt;there is so much snow&lt;br /&gt;you can hardly feel&lt;br /&gt;your fingers and toes.  &lt;br /&gt;People get robbed walking&lt;br /&gt;down the street.  As you&lt;br /&gt;walk you see your feet&lt;br /&gt;prints.  You go in the house&lt;br /&gt;and get a cup of hot cocoa&lt;br /&gt;with 6 marshmallows.  Get&lt;br /&gt;under a blanket nice and &lt;br /&gt;cozy.  All at 6 o’clock on the&lt;br /&gt;dot.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;The Best Night&lt;br /&gt;Jasmine W.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;10 o’clock at night on&lt;br /&gt;a winter night I hear people&lt;br /&gt;walking and taking in the &lt;br /&gt;snow, laughing and having&lt;br /&gt;a good time with one &lt;br /&gt;another.  I see darkness&lt;br /&gt;sparkle snow on the ground&lt;br /&gt;mixed with hail, street&lt;br /&gt;lights and on cars driving&lt;br /&gt;horns beeping.  Next thing&lt;br /&gt;you know it it it . . .quiet.&lt;br /&gt;No sound, just blank.  I smell&lt;br /&gt;hotdogs, cheeseburgers, waffles&lt;br /&gt;hot wings, popeyes, perfume,&lt;br /&gt;flowers, mac and cheese, I smell&lt;br /&gt;everything in the book.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;The Fun Day&lt;br /&gt;Marissa M.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;It is summer time.  1:30.&lt;br /&gt;Kids are running around, kids&lt;br /&gt;play jump rope.  People are cooking.&lt;br /&gt;The food smelling good, boys&lt;br /&gt;playing basketball, boys and girls&lt;br /&gt;are running around in the&lt;br /&gt;park.  Kids going to the &lt;br /&gt;store.  The ice cream truck&lt;br /&gt;driving around.  The kids are&lt;br /&gt;fighting.  Some kids are going&lt;br /&gt;to the beach.  Some kids are&lt;br /&gt;going to the water park.  Some&lt;br /&gt;kids are going swimming.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;12:00 At Night&lt;br /&gt;Terry C.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;12 o’clock at night colder than ice&lt;br /&gt;lightning flashing with the moon&lt;br /&gt;glancing from the night snow&lt;br /&gt;falling from the sky like&lt;br /&gt;the white moon at night&lt;br /&gt;clouds bright as no light&lt;br /&gt;weirder than fright&lt;div class="blogger-post-footer"&gt;&lt;img width='1' height='1' src='https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/tracker/6926938288565421615-9032797388342671113?l=johnhayschoolpoetry.blogspot.com' alt='' /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;</content><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://johnhayschoolpoetry.blogspot.com/feeds/9032797388342671113/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://www.blogger.com/comment.g?blogID=6926938288565421615&amp;postID=9032797388342671113' title='1 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/6926938288565421615/posts/default/9032797388342671113'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/6926938288565421615/posts/default/9032797388342671113'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://johnhayschoolpoetry.blogspot.com/2007/12/from-ts-eliot-to-chicago.html' title='From T.S. Eliot to Chicago'/><author><name>LVP</name><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='16' height='16' src='http://img2.blogblog.com/img/b16-rounded.gif'/></author><thr:total>1</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6926938288565421615.post-4175447967852782773</id><published>2007-12-06T12:32:00.000-08:00</published><updated>2007-12-06T12:35:12.793-08:00</updated><title type='text'>Miss Rosie</title><content type='html'>We read "Miss Rosie" by Lucille Clifton.  This lesson focused on mood and concrete details that give us cues about mood.  The students were very close readers noticing how Lucille Clifton changes the mood midway through the poem from sad to victorious.  The students wrote really interesting poems.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Ms. Cole 6th grade&lt;br /&gt;Week 5&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;The Man That Lives on the End of the Gas Station&lt;br /&gt;Terrence S.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;When I watch you fight people for no reason&lt;br /&gt;surrounded by all these people.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Or, &lt;br /&gt;no one is around because of you.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;When I watch you in your box house on the end&lt;br /&gt;of the gas station&lt;br /&gt;waiting for someone to say something to you.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;I say &lt;br /&gt;that man is slow and needs help.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Crazy Dave&lt;br /&gt;Kenya W.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;When I watch you come down the street&lt;br /&gt;surrounded by my classmates&lt;br /&gt;or&lt;br /&gt;when I watch you in your black jacket and colorful clothes&lt;br /&gt;waiting for you to come to the gate&lt;br /&gt;I say stand up for what you believe in&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Crazy Man&lt;br /&gt;Jameena S.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;When I watch you walking down the street talking&lt;br /&gt;to yourself and taking people’s&lt;br /&gt;things out of their backyards&lt;br /&gt;surrounded by little kids just watching&lt;br /&gt;and talking about you and the things you do&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;or&lt;br /&gt;wearing two different kinds of shoes &lt;br /&gt;with bleached clothes&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;when I watch you in your baseball helmet&lt;br /&gt;washing people’s care without them knowing&lt;br /&gt;you are doing it&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;waiting for people to come out of their house&lt;br /&gt;and pay you for washing their car&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;I say look at him doing things&lt;br /&gt;he has no business doing&lt;br /&gt;that is what I say&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Ms. Harris 6th grade&lt;br /&gt;Week 5&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Crazy Dave&lt;br /&gt;Dequan B.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;When I watch you picking&lt;br /&gt;through garbage&lt;br /&gt;surrounded by garbage&lt;br /&gt;and alleys&lt;br /&gt;or&lt;br /&gt;when I watch you in your 2&lt;br /&gt;different shoes with different&lt;br /&gt;color clothes and nuts and fake&lt;br /&gt;jewelry&lt;br /&gt;waiting for your mind like next&lt;br /&gt;Christmas&lt;br /&gt;I say&lt;br /&gt;you used to be the quietest boy&lt;br /&gt;on earth&lt;br /&gt;I stand up&lt;br /&gt;through your craziest&lt;br /&gt;I stand up&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Ricard and His Big Coat&lt;br /&gt;Cleorra G.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;When I watch you carry big bags&lt;br /&gt;of garbage around on your bike&lt;br /&gt;with a hole in your shirt &lt;br /&gt;and small tight pants&lt;br /&gt;surrounded by dead grass, leaves&lt;br /&gt;and insects and wet garbage &lt;br /&gt;sitting by dumpsters and cans&lt;br /&gt;or&lt;br /&gt;when I watch you in your big coat&lt;br /&gt;and gym shoes with no strings&lt;br /&gt;and holes in your coast&lt;br /&gt;waiting for the sun&lt;br /&gt;to come out&lt;br /&gt;I say I would buy you food&lt;br /&gt;and tell you to get &lt;br /&gt;a job&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Quarter Man&lt;br /&gt;Omarr B.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;When I watch you go around and put &lt;br /&gt;your hand in a circle &lt;br /&gt;and ask for a quarter&lt;br /&gt;surrounded by dumpsters and rats&lt;br /&gt;and possums&lt;br /&gt;or&lt;br /&gt;when I watch you in your mind you are lost&lt;br /&gt;thinking about quarters&lt;br /&gt;waiting for someone to walk by and &lt;br /&gt;put a quarter in your can&lt;br /&gt;I say wake up and realize&lt;br /&gt;that you are somebody get up&lt;br /&gt;and get a job and you maybe will have&lt;br /&gt;quarters, even dollars&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Ms. Kessinger 6th grade&lt;br /&gt;Week 5&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;My Story&lt;br /&gt;Shaquita B.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;A man named Crazy Davide&lt;br /&gt;they call him that because &lt;br /&gt;he is crazy he is tall and skinny&lt;br /&gt;a black man walking up and down&lt;br /&gt;the block he always dances&lt;br /&gt;and talks to himself&lt;br /&gt;he goes in the garbage and gets&lt;br /&gt;coats and shoes, red, green, blue&lt;br /&gt;black and all other colors.  If&lt;br /&gt;I was to stand up for him&lt;br /&gt;I would take him to get some clothes&lt;br /&gt;and shoes.  I will give him food&lt;br /&gt;to eat and then he will be cute&lt;br /&gt;and people will like him when &lt;br /&gt;he is fixed up.  I forgot&lt;br /&gt;he smells like old greens.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;The Crazy Young Lady&lt;br /&gt;Lyneisha F.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;When I watch you&lt;br /&gt;come outside after school&lt;br /&gt;with your schools dirty&lt;br /&gt;surrounded by a whole group&lt;br /&gt;of people saying get her&lt;br /&gt;get her with dirty punks&lt;br /&gt;waiting for someone to fight&lt;br /&gt;or&lt;br /&gt;when I watch you in your little&lt;br /&gt;position in the middle of the street&lt;br /&gt;waiting for someone to come so you can push&lt;br /&gt;them around&lt;br /&gt;I say&lt;br /&gt;stop!&lt;br /&gt;no more!&lt;br /&gt;I had enough of your bullying&lt;br /&gt;stop!!!&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Ice Cold&lt;br /&gt;Malcolm M.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;When I watch you saying hello to people&lt;br /&gt;that are not there&lt;br /&gt;surrounded by old clothes &lt;br /&gt;and eating old food out of the garbage can&lt;br /&gt;the ALDI people throw away&lt;br /&gt;or&lt;br /&gt;when I watch you in your shoes&lt;br /&gt;telling me to go to school&lt;br /&gt;and get and education&lt;br /&gt;waiting for a job&lt;br /&gt;and some new shoes and clothes&lt;br /&gt;and I say I am going to stand up&lt;br /&gt;and be proud&lt;br /&gt;I will stand up and help&lt;div class="blogger-post-footer"&gt;&lt;img width='1' height='1' src='https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/tracker/6926938288565421615-4175447967852782773?l=johnhayschoolpoetry.blogspot.com' alt='' /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;</content><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://johnhayschoolpoetry.blogspot.com/feeds/4175447967852782773/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://www.blogger.com/comment.g?blogID=6926938288565421615&amp;postID=4175447967852782773' title='0 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/6926938288565421615/posts/default/4175447967852782773'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/6926938288565421615/posts/default/4175447967852782773'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://johnhayschoolpoetry.blogspot.com/2007/12/miss-rosie.html' title='Miss Rosie'/><author><name>LVP</name><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='16' height='16' src='http://img2.blogblog.com/img/b16-rounded.gif'/></author><thr:total>0</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6926938288565421615.post-3169013643843526606</id><published>2007-11-08T09:14:00.000-08:00</published><updated>2007-11-08T09:15:53.103-08:00</updated><title type='text'>Little Room</title><content type='html'>We read Max Jacob's poem "Little Room."  The students and I discusssed concrete details and how they create setting.  We had a really great discussion about the way the speaker remembered and imagined his childhood room.  Then, the students were asked to remember a place they knew and to focus on setting while they wrote.  There were many favorite places revisited.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Ms. Cole 6th grade&lt;br /&gt;Week 3&lt;br /&gt;10/25/07&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Garden Square&lt;br /&gt;-Octavia B.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;I remember a place I used to&lt;br /&gt;love at my grandma’s house it was&lt;br /&gt;in her backyard.  I called it the&lt;br /&gt;garden square.  I used to think that&lt;br /&gt;the garden was a jungle.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Sometimes when I go into &lt;br /&gt;the garden square I think about &lt;br /&gt;the ants. Spiders are turning &lt;br /&gt;big.  I smell nature. I hear&lt;br /&gt;wild animals and &lt;br /&gt;I hear voices and see a lot&lt;br /&gt;of trees.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Poem&lt;br /&gt;-Daveon J.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;I remember my friend’s garage.  The color&lt;br /&gt;of the black Lexus, the fresh-car smell,&lt;br /&gt;the darkness of the garage, on which I &lt;br /&gt;would just sit there and chill with my&lt;br /&gt;friends.  There were many thing in this&lt;br /&gt;garage, care tires, windows, old clocks, and&lt;br /&gt;many rocks.  I would sit in the car and&lt;br /&gt;maybe write, wit the room so dark, the&lt;br /&gt;quietest garage in the world.&lt;br /&gt;And that’s my most favorite place I know.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Poem&lt;br /&gt;-Shirlette S.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;I remember the quiet&lt;br /&gt;place in the house.  The walls were like&lt;br /&gt;a lot of little squares.  I see a lot&lt;br /&gt;of creatures in it, but they are fake frogs.&lt;br /&gt;The frogs have all different kinds of patterns&lt;br /&gt;on them like Zs Zacks.  Every time I&lt;br /&gt;need a place to go somebody is always&lt;br /&gt;in there.  I close the door and write songs&lt;br /&gt;and do my homework.  This place&lt;br /&gt;is not that big but I sit on &lt;br /&gt;the edge of the bathtub and&lt;br /&gt;write whatever I feel.  Sometimes&lt;br /&gt;it takes me a long time to get in&lt;br /&gt;there because people go in and out&lt;br /&gt;the bathroom, yes, I said the bathroom&lt;br /&gt;where I can study and nobody&lt;br /&gt;can tell me what to do &lt;br /&gt;and how to do it.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Ms. Harris 6th grade&lt;br /&gt;Week 3&lt;br /&gt;10/25/07&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Poem&lt;br /&gt;Carisma F.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;I remember in my room&lt;br /&gt;staring at the &lt;br /&gt;wall imagining&lt;br /&gt;it as the pretty&lt;br /&gt;dark blue sky&lt;br /&gt;looking at all&lt;br /&gt;the thousands&lt;br /&gt;of stars,&lt;br /&gt;hoping I will&lt;br /&gt;see a shooting&lt;br /&gt;star, looking&lt;br /&gt;at that bold&lt;br /&gt;moon, asking&lt;br /&gt;myself what&lt;br /&gt;if I could be that&lt;br /&gt;first black American&lt;br /&gt;child to reach&lt;br /&gt;the moon touching &lt;br /&gt;it, what if I could &lt;br /&gt;be the first black&lt;br /&gt;child on all the planets&lt;br /&gt;starting with Mercury and ending&lt;br /&gt;with Pluto.  What if?  How&lt;br /&gt;come, did I, would I, DO&lt;br /&gt;I have the guts to go&lt;br /&gt;to the solar system.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;My Poem&lt;br /&gt;-Arrion L.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;I remember a gold&lt;br /&gt;house was a good&lt;br /&gt;place for me gold&lt;br /&gt;knobs on the doors down&lt;br /&gt;on the floor I used&lt;br /&gt;to see things down there&lt;br /&gt;good things I see it.&lt;br /&gt;Just for me knowing&lt;br /&gt;that the gold house is&lt;br /&gt;all for me to see&lt;br /&gt;when I am fast a&lt;br /&gt;sleep.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;I Remember&lt;br /&gt;-Jermel H.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;I remember in the&lt;br /&gt;fall time as a young child&lt;br /&gt;with my mother and grand&lt;br /&gt;mother at the train station one night.  It&lt;br /&gt;was windy and the wind blew me up&lt;br /&gt;over my mom.  I was floating&lt;br /&gt;in the sky.  I couldn’t get down&lt;br /&gt;from the air.  It kept me up in the&lt;br /&gt;sky, people driving on the expressway&lt;br /&gt;looked at me.  Soon my mother and grand&lt;br /&gt;mother were screaming for help while&lt;br /&gt;I was floating above the train tracks.&lt;br /&gt;Soon I blacked out and I woke up&lt;br /&gt;in the hospital.  I asked what&lt;br /&gt;happened.  They said the wind&lt;br /&gt;blew me up in the sky.  I remembered&lt;br /&gt;that day for the rest of my life.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Ms. Kessinger 6th grade&lt;br /&gt;Week 3&lt;br /&gt;10/25/07&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Best Place Ever&lt;br /&gt;-Tysheanna F.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;I remember my playroom as a small&lt;br /&gt;child.  The room was empty.  It had&lt;br /&gt;only a table, a lamp and a microwave.&lt;br /&gt;I sat there and wrote or played with&lt;br /&gt;my toys.  Sometimes I even went to sleep&lt;br /&gt;on the bed.  The room was very quiet and&lt;br /&gt;fun.  Sometimes it made me want to &lt;br /&gt;sing.  On the wall there were small&lt;br /&gt;animals.  I transformed them into sea animals&lt;br /&gt;in water.  I became a fountain that&lt;br /&gt;blows so pretty.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;I remember a soccer field&lt;br /&gt;--Virginia E.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;In this soccer field I see &lt;br /&gt;men become kids, a chair become&lt;br /&gt;a boat, a ball become a river or a&lt;br /&gt;beach, women become girls, boys &lt;br /&gt;become kings, and girls become&lt;br /&gt;princesses.  I hear the waves,&lt;br /&gt;princesses give rules, kings cheer &lt;br /&gt;for their new wives.  It looks like&lt;br /&gt;a mansion with water all over,&lt;br /&gt;people around it.  I always can&lt;br /&gt;touch the river, the people&lt;br /&gt;and myself.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Poem &lt;br /&gt;-Chaddrick M.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;I remember when I went&lt;br /&gt;to six flags when I walked in I&lt;br /&gt;saw a whole bunch of people walking&lt;br /&gt;around an&lt;br /&gt;when I&lt;br /&gt;looked up&lt;br /&gt;I saw kids yelling&lt;br /&gt;and screaming I want&lt;br /&gt;to&lt;br /&gt;get off&lt;br /&gt;also&lt;br /&gt;When I was&lt;br /&gt;in line&lt;br /&gt;for&lt;br /&gt;a&lt;br /&gt;ride&lt;br /&gt;I saw kids&lt;br /&gt;cutting&lt;br /&gt;the line&lt;br /&gt;saying I had been&lt;br /&gt;right here&lt;br /&gt;and I hear rollercoasters going&lt;br /&gt;straight&lt;br /&gt;up&lt;br /&gt;into the&lt;br /&gt;air&lt;br /&gt;like&lt;br /&gt;a&lt;br /&gt;gorilla&lt;br /&gt;pounding&lt;br /&gt;on&lt;br /&gt;his&lt;br /&gt;chest&lt;br /&gt;roaring.&lt;div class="blogger-post-footer"&gt;&lt;img width='1' height='1' src='https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/tracker/6926938288565421615-3169013643843526606?l=johnhayschoolpoetry.blogspot.com' alt='' /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;</content><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://johnhayschoolpoetry.blogspot.com/feeds/3169013643843526606/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://www.blogger.com/comment.g?blogID=6926938288565421615&amp;postID=3169013643843526606' title='0 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/6926938288565421615/posts/default/3169013643843526606'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/6926938288565421615/posts/default/3169013643843526606'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://johnhayschoolpoetry.blogspot.com/2007/11/little-room.html' title='Little Room'/><author><name>LVP</name><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='16' height='16' src='http://img2.blogblog.com/img/b16-rounded.gif'/></author><thr:total>0</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6926938288565421615.post-3829262052836516997</id><published>2007-11-08T09:04:00.000-08:00</published><updated>2007-11-08T09:08:00.960-08:00</updated><title type='text'>Double, Double Toil and Trouble</title><content type='html'>To get in the spirit of Halloween, we read a segment of Act 4 from Macbeth. We had a discussion about mood, and how moods can actually be set by the inclusion of specific concrete details. The students were then asked to create a mood by designing their own brew. As expected, the brews got pretty scary.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Ms. Cole 6th grade&lt;br /&gt;Week 4&lt;br /&gt;11/01/07&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Die a Little Later Brew&lt;br /&gt;-Arquesha A.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;In my brew I will include&lt;br /&gt;a cat’s eye and baby drool.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Eye of leopard.  Toe of D.&lt;br /&gt;Hair of A.  Teaspoon&lt;br /&gt;of Shaq’s tongue.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;For a charm of powerful trouble&lt;br /&gt;I will add a tail of raccoon.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Here is what my brew can do&lt;br /&gt;make you a celebrity.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Room of Fear&lt;br /&gt;-Sendalio W.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;In my brew I will include&lt;br /&gt;lizard eye and dog legs.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Tail of cheetah.  Hair of&lt;br /&gt;a person.  Tongue of a raccoon.&lt;br /&gt;Toe of a cat.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;For a charm of powerful trouble&lt;br /&gt;I will add a sting of a bee.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Brew of Trouble&lt;br /&gt;-Amanda C.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Double, double toil and&lt;br /&gt;trouble, fire burn, and&lt;br /&gt;cauldron bubble.  Eye of a &lt;br /&gt;cat and tail of a snake.&lt;br /&gt;In this cauldron this&lt;br /&gt;will bake.  A pinch of brain&lt;br /&gt;you’ll go insane.  A teaspoon&lt;br /&gt;of blood and hint of &lt;br /&gt;mud.  For a charm of such&lt;br /&gt;trouble my brew can &lt;br /&gt;tell your future.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Ms. Harris 6th grade&lt;br /&gt;Week 4&lt;br /&gt;11/01/07&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;The Hungry Brew&lt;br /&gt;-Derrick H.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;In my brew I will include&lt;br /&gt;a woman’s foot.  Eye of &lt;br /&gt;a crow, toe of a moe, half of &lt;br /&gt;a rat, tongue of a boy like that.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Here is what my brew can do.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;My brew can make chicken soup.&lt;br /&gt;My brew can make you tie your shoe.&lt;br /&gt;It can make it go from loop through&lt;br /&gt;loop, and my brew would make your opponent&lt;br /&gt;cease the hoop.  That’s what my brew could do.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Double Trouble&lt;br /&gt;-Malik T.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;In my brew I will include&lt;br /&gt;human shoes.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Eye of a wolf. Toe of mice.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Hair of a bear.  Tongue of a lion.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;For a charm of powerful trouble&lt;br /&gt;I will add a monkey’s ear.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Here is what my brew can do.  It&lt;br /&gt;can make a sound like kaboom.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;The Halloween Brew&lt;br /&gt;-Latisha M.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Double, double toil and trouble.&lt;br /&gt;In my brew I will include a pig’s tail.&lt;br /&gt;eye of a porcupine, a toe of raccoon.  &lt;br /&gt;Hair of a monkey.  Tongue of a lizard.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;For a charm of powerful trouble&lt;br /&gt;I will add the eye of a snake.&lt;br /&gt;Here is what my brew can do—make &lt;br /&gt;a bowl of ice cream glue.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Ms. Kessinger 6th grade&lt;br /&gt;Week 4&lt;br /&gt;11/01/07&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;The Scary 303&lt;br /&gt;Jacobi D.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Triple, triple blood and death&lt;br /&gt;this is 303, no more Macbeth.&lt;br /&gt;Eye of a tiger, oh so scary.&lt;br /&gt;Hair of a bear, oh so hairy.&lt;br /&gt;Halloween is coming, Halloween&lt;br /&gt;is here.  All you &lt;br /&gt;kids better have no fear.&lt;br /&gt;This is my curse&lt;br /&gt;a curse of me.  Say this &lt;br /&gt;curse and you’ll be free.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Hot Room in a Bed Room&lt;br /&gt;Amia R.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Double, double toil and trouble&lt;br /&gt;as an ear of a person&lt;br /&gt;a tongue of a snake&lt;br /&gt;a bat wing as it was broken&lt;br /&gt;off, a dog foot as it &lt;br /&gt;was walking.  A lizard fear&lt;br /&gt;as it was cutting off.&lt;br /&gt;That’s what I think&lt;br /&gt;about the trouble.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;How Do You Like Your Brew!&lt;br /&gt;-Rae L.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Tick tock watch me drop&lt;br /&gt;an eye of a rat.  &lt;br /&gt;The tongue on a grum&lt;br /&gt;and the hair of an octopus&lt;br /&gt;the toe of a goblin and venom from&lt;br /&gt;a werewolf.  For this charm of&lt;br /&gt;of power and trouble I will add&lt;br /&gt;the spit of a daredevil.&lt;br /&gt;Here is what my brew can do, &lt;br /&gt;make you my slaves and do &lt;br /&gt;whatever I want.  From sucking&lt;br /&gt;blood to making a glass of tea.&lt;br /&gt;Do what I want or be turned &lt;br /&gt;into pig’s feet.&lt;div class="blogger-post-footer"&gt;&lt;img width='1' height='1' src='https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/tracker/6926938288565421615-3829262052836516997?l=johnhayschoolpoetry.blogspot.com' alt='' /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;</content><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://johnhayschoolpoetry.blogspot.com/feeds/3829262052836516997/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://www.blogger.com/comment.g?blogID=6926938288565421615&amp;postID=3829262052836516997' title='0 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/6926938288565421615/posts/default/3829262052836516997'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/6926938288565421615/posts/default/3829262052836516997'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://johnhayschoolpoetry.blogspot.com/2007/11/double-double-toil-and-trouble.html' title='Double, Double Toil and Trouble'/><author><name>LVP</name><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='16' height='16' src='http://img2.blogblog.com/img/b16-rounded.gif'/></author><thr:total>0</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6926938288565421615.post-2896370282366847848</id><published>2007-10-29T18:19:00.000-07:00</published><updated>2007-11-08T08:51:00.114-08:00</updated><title type='text'>Go Inside</title><content type='html'>We read Charles Simic's "The Stone." The students and I had a good time imagining getting very tiny and having the ability to go inside of something. Using their senses and concrete images, here are some of their ideas.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Ms. Cole 6th grade&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Go Inside a Fish&lt;br /&gt;--Takayla J.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Go inside a fish&lt;br /&gt;that will be great.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Let somebody else become a shark&lt;br /&gt;or gnawing on a piece of seaweed.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;I’m anxious to be a fish.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;From the outside the fish is surrounded&lt;br /&gt;with sea animals.  Yet within it must be &lt;br /&gt;weird and smooth.  Even though a shark&lt;br /&gt;swims over it the fish is afraid.  Even&lt;br /&gt;though people cut them open I want to see&lt;br /&gt;them breathing.  &lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;I have seen bubbles come out of it&lt;br /&gt;when it talks.  So perhaps&lt;br /&gt;it is not quiet inside after all.  Perhaps&lt;br /&gt;there it is clear.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Go Inside a Tree&lt;br /&gt;--William D.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Go inside a tree.&lt;br /&gt;That would be my home.&lt;br /&gt;Let somebody else become&lt;br /&gt;a seal lion or a dog&lt;br /&gt;with no teeth.  This is why&lt;br /&gt;I’m a tree.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;From the outside of the tree&lt;br /&gt;it looks like a monster with wings.&lt;br /&gt;Yet within the tree it’s a jungle&lt;br /&gt;even though shoes climb around me,&lt;br /&gt;even though children climb&lt;br /&gt;on me.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;I have seen birds&lt;br /&gt;fly away.  So birds&lt;br /&gt;build nests in trees.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Go inside a Pisces&lt;br /&gt;--Shadowmar H.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Go inside a Pisces&lt;br /&gt;that has fins to wave back and forth&lt;br /&gt;to swim.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;From the outside you can see other things &lt;br /&gt;that come from the bottom of the ocean.&lt;br /&gt;You can wave your fins.  You can see &lt;br /&gt;buried treasure.  Lots of treasure&lt;br /&gt;about Pisces the fish, you can find&lt;br /&gt;good luck charms and so on.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Yet within the water must be cool.&lt;br /&gt;A Pisces likes water.  It makes &lt;br /&gt;it hydrated.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;I have seen Pisces with quick attitudes.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;So perhaps that’s my sign of the zodiac.&lt;br /&gt;I want to be an astrologer.  It’s fun.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Ms. Harris 6th grade&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Poem&lt;br /&gt;--Michael B.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Go inside a coca-cola pop&lt;br /&gt;that would be my way.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Let somebody else be a superstar or a dancer.  &lt;br /&gt;I am happy to be a coca-cola pop.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;From the outside the pop is a white&lt;br /&gt;and black can that has &lt;br /&gt;no design.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Yet within it must be cool and quiet&lt;br /&gt;even though some people step on it&lt;br /&gt;with their feet.  A child crushes it&lt;br /&gt;with his hands because he doesn’t &lt;br /&gt;open the pop all the way.  &lt;br /&gt;Homeless people come get it.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;I have seen many people drinking it&lt;br /&gt;when they are on the road.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;So perhaps it is not nasty after all.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Go Inside&lt;br /&gt;--George G.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;I’d go inside of a car’s engine.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;From the outside it looks like an engine.&lt;br /&gt;Yet within it has a lot of tools and machines.&lt;br /&gt;It pumps gas. It looks like a world&lt;br /&gt;make of tools.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;I have seen smoke coming &lt;br /&gt;form it and oil.  Sometimes it caught&lt;br /&gt;on fire.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;So perhaps it looks different &lt;br /&gt;like carnival rides.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Wonders with Lights&lt;br /&gt;--Rayumos H.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Go inside a stone.&lt;br /&gt;Let somebody else be alive with wonders.&lt;br /&gt;From the outside I see a skull head.&lt;br /&gt;Yet within the skull I see holes in the stone.&lt;br /&gt;I have seen minerals and crystals.  Rare stones.&lt;br /&gt;So perhaps I should stay here and look at them for hours and hours.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Ms. Kessinger 6th grade&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Go Inside&lt;br /&gt;-Dawn H.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Go inside a computer to see how things work.&lt;br /&gt;Let somebody else be a shining star&lt;br /&gt;in the sky that shines for 12 hours straight.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;From the outside of the computer I see &lt;br /&gt;a black screen with a button on it.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Yet within it is silent and cool&lt;br /&gt;and shows many wires of blue, green red and yellow.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;I have seen little chips with wires planted into them.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;So perhaps it wasn’t so silent and cool&lt;br /&gt;after someone turned me on.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Poem&lt;br /&gt;-Eric W.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;In my brain there are so many words&lt;br /&gt;that no one has a key to open it.&lt;br /&gt;Many things I see.  A river of blood.&lt;br /&gt;It’s like I am looking at&lt;br /&gt;a red light it’s&lt;br /&gt;like my brain&lt;br /&gt;has been&lt;br /&gt;flushed down&lt;br /&gt;an ocean.  &lt;br /&gt;If a lot &lt;br /&gt;of people&lt;br /&gt;are in their brain&lt;br /&gt;and outside&lt;br /&gt;of a brain&lt;br /&gt;it is a good look.&lt;br /&gt;Like me&lt;br /&gt;many people fell&lt;br /&gt;and are falling.&lt;br /&gt;I will say &lt;br /&gt;on my two feet&lt;br /&gt;all of my &lt;br /&gt;life I love this &lt;br /&gt;man, Eric W.,&lt;br /&gt;and I will not let some &lt;br /&gt;make words and my brain.&lt;br /&gt;I put a cover on my head&lt;br /&gt;and no one will have the key to go&lt;br /&gt;in a good brain like mine.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Go Inside&lt;br /&gt;-Malik H.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;I will go inside a McDonald’s&lt;br /&gt;to study the way to be small.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Let somebody else be the apple&lt;br /&gt;falling off the tree.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;From the outside I am smaller than you.&lt;br /&gt;I can use my ability to wonder.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Yet within my mind I can be &lt;br /&gt;what I want to be in my imagination&lt;br /&gt;and go where I want to go.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;I have seen many things, but nothing like &lt;br /&gt;the inside of this apple.  It has lots&lt;br /&gt;of beautiful emotions like me.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;so perhaps I was dreaming&lt;br /&gt;and was thinking of my life.&lt;div class="blogger-post-footer"&gt;&lt;img width='1' height='1' src='https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/tracker/6926938288565421615-2896370282366847848?l=johnhayschoolpoetry.blogspot.com' alt='' /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;</content><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://johnhayschoolpoetry.blogspot.com/feeds/2896370282366847848/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://www.blogger.com/comment.g?blogID=6926938288565421615&amp;postID=2896370282366847848' title='0 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/6926938288565421615/posts/default/2896370282366847848'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/6926938288565421615/posts/default/2896370282366847848'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://johnhayschoolpoetry.blogspot.com/2007/10/go-inside.html' title='Go Inside'/><author><name>LVP</name><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='16' height='16' src='http://img2.blogblog.com/img/b16-rounded.gif'/></author><thr:total>0</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6926938288565421615.post-6082481161471260830</id><published>2007-10-29T18:16:00.000-07:00</published><updated>2007-10-29T18:17:30.435-07:00</updated><title type='text'>Magic</title><content type='html'>On our first day, we read the poem "Magic" by Dahlia Ravikovitch. I asked the students to think about some things they might want to be: &lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Ms. Cole, 6th grade&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Poem&lt;br /&gt;Miguel A.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Today I’m an eagle,&lt;br /&gt;soaring through the sky.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Last night I dreamt &lt;br /&gt;of dinosaurs white, blue&lt;br /&gt;transparent—&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Today I’m a cheetah,&lt;br /&gt;tomorrow and Oak tree.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Yesterday the Grand Canyon,&lt;br /&gt;today a Rose.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Tomorrow I’ll be a guitar.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;What I am &lt;br /&gt;Devonte L.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Today I am the voice&lt;br /&gt;of a bird seeking its prey.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Tomorrow a boy having&lt;br /&gt;a fun day dripping &lt;br /&gt;while he skates.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Last night I dreamt &lt;br /&gt;of an orange and green sky&lt;br /&gt;wouldn’t no one &lt;br /&gt;ask me why.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;In the morning I listened&lt;br /&gt;to the endless words&lt;br /&gt;of mine.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Today I’m an exotic&lt;br /&gt;cave on the end of a Pueblo.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Yesterday a Jeep&lt;br /&gt;running out of gas.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Poem&lt;br /&gt;Keegan O.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Today I am a shiny statue bold and great.&lt;br /&gt;Still and bold, not ever moving on the platform.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Last night I dreamt of gorges silver and gold,&lt;br /&gt;shiny and beautiful with diamonds.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;In the morning a huge tarantula was spinning webs,&lt;br /&gt;killing insects and dangerous bugs.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Today I am a pink seashell lost in the ocean,&lt;br /&gt;trapped in the seas of the shark and fish.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Yesterday I was an exotic poet,&lt;br /&gt;rhyming and making a lot of money.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Tomorrow I will be a successful person&lt;br /&gt;with a good life.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Ms. Harris, 6th grade&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Poem&lt;br /&gt;Laquesha B.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Today I am going to be &lt;br /&gt;a fast runner&lt;br /&gt;that runs so fast.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Last night I dreamt that I was a fox&lt;br /&gt;that stayed up all night.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;In the morning I will be a robot&lt;br /&gt;that walks all funny.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Today I will be a bird&lt;br /&gt;that can fly anywhere.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Yesterday I was a pretty butterfly&lt;br /&gt;that can go anywhere it wants.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;How Everything Changes&lt;br /&gt;KeJuan M.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Today I am a comoto dragon.&lt;br /&gt;Last night I dreamt I was the sun&lt;br /&gt;shining on everyone.  Today I will be a spider-&lt;br /&gt;monkey that has red skin and blue fur.&lt;br /&gt;Yesterday I was an artist and tomorrow&lt;br /&gt;Albert Einstein teaching science.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;The Magic of Edward&lt;br /&gt;Edward S.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Today I am a dog &lt;br /&gt;as big as a house and can&lt;br /&gt;jump in the sky.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Last night I dreamt&lt;br /&gt;there was a masked killer&lt;br /&gt;running for me.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;In the morning &lt;br /&gt;I was as big as a house&lt;br /&gt;and people lived in me.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Today I’m an ant in the house&lt;br /&gt;looking for food.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Yesterday I was a snowman&lt;br /&gt;walking and talking.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Ms. Kessinger, 6th grade&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Who I Am&lt;br /&gt;Dominique B.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Today I’m a pretty dog&lt;br /&gt;that can walk and talk.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Last night I dreamt I was a pop star&lt;br /&gt;who can play volleyball.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;In the morning, I’m a judge&lt;br /&gt;who is a great singer and dancer.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Today, I’m a sandy beach with &lt;br /&gt;a lot of kids.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Yesterday a nice teacher.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Today I’m a pony that kids can ride.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Tomorrow I will be a Queen.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Poetry&lt;br /&gt;Johnny B.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Today I am yesterday,&lt;br /&gt;tomorrow.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Last night I dreamt&lt;br /&gt;that I was shooting star&lt;br /&gt;the granted wishes.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Today I am the voice&lt;br /&gt;of the young.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;What I Am&lt;br /&gt;Justina P.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Today I am a female&lt;br /&gt;president who is African-American.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Last night I dreamt &lt;br /&gt;of a powerful goddess.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;In the morning &lt;br /&gt;I am a caring doctor.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Today I am a veterinarian&lt;br /&gt;who loves animals and mammals.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Yesterday I am a lawyer&lt;br /&gt;who knows what is right and wrong.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Tomorrow I am regular me,&lt;br /&gt;that is what I am.&lt;div class="blogger-post-footer"&gt;&lt;img width='1' height='1' src='https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/tracker/6926938288565421615-6082481161471260830?l=johnhayschoolpoetry.blogspot.com' alt='' /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;</content><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://johnhayschoolpoetry.blogspot.com/feeds/6082481161471260830/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://www.blogger.com/comment.g?blogID=6926938288565421615&amp;postID=6082481161471260830' title='0 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/6926938288565421615/posts/default/6082481161471260830'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/6926938288565421615/posts/default/6082481161471260830'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://johnhayschoolpoetry.blogspot.com/2007/10/magic.html' title='Magic'/><author><name>LVP</name><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='16' height='16' src='http://img2.blogblog.com/img/b16-rounded.gif'/></author><thr:total>0</thr:total></entry></feed>
